Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

What a terrific poem, Craig. Conceit and self-importance definitely do lead us down a path of doom. Strangest thing the human brain and a powerful weapon of mass destruction when in the wrong hands.

A fitting and most terrific poem and the artwork is fantastic too.

Gloria

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018

Thanks for the wonderful comments, Gloria. I think I agree, someone made an awful mistake placing human brains in human hands (or heads). Cheers, Craig

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Limerick about humans that need someone to rule over them to keep them in order and playing by the rules that was made to have peace in the country.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018

Thanks very much, Sandra. Have a wonderful rest of your weekend! Craig

Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

I couldn't agree more. We lessen our chances of survival as a species by dividing into camps and nations. Thinking as One is the only way to steer this ship through turbulent waters. If all poets could be inspired to pass on the message, who knows what a difference it might bring about. Well done, CD.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018

Thanks for the thoughtful observations and kind comments. Both are much appreciated :) Craig

Comment from meeshu

Exceptional

that is one great poem. the language is fantastic but not overstated. it is a great word that you use flawlessly. a short poem that doesn't try to be more than it is. in my mind a 6six6 star, CD................meeshu

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018

Thank you very much for the wonderfully kind comments, Meeshu. Also, most grateful for the lovely shiny stars. Have a great remainder of your weekend :) Craig

Comment from Kelly Hanna

Excellent

Very creative idea to write a word into a poem! I like it! Also, the flow was nice and the topic was interesting. I enjoyed reading the poem. Good job.............

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 Comment Written 01-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018

Thanks very much, Kelly. Most grateful for the kind comments -- Craig

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Yes, Craig, since man is greedy. The more he has, the more he wants and will stop at nothing to attain it. Good job with your poem form today. Your picture + words make a great read. Good rhyme and smooth flow. Man will continue on blindly until the end. Then if those left will start again. Thanks for sharing. Jan

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 Comment Written 01-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018

Thanks once again for the fine comments, Jan. Most appreciated -- Craig