A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
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Comment from Kelly Grim
Well done, well done! Pot-valour is a real thing and this depiction is perfect, right down to the last 2 lines, which are excellent! Great meter and rhyme! Very enjoyable!
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Well done, well done! Pot-valour is a real thing and this depiction is perfect, right down to the last 2 lines, which are excellent! Great meter and rhyme! Very enjoyable!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for the lovely comments, Kelly. Glad you enjoyed :) Craig
Comment from zlp22
Interesting poem.not many write about fighting. It is better to walk away. Good word flow and picture makes it an easy and fast read.Good luck on your writing.
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Interesting poem.not many write about fighting. It is better to walk away. Good word flow and picture makes it an easy and fast read.Good luck on your writing.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Thanks very much for the comments, most appreciated. Craig
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
C D I give you an excellent score just for that last line about the teeth. LOL having no fear and going all the way then the final line took the whole cake I love it thank you for sharing that was a mighty Hard Punch
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C D I give you an excellent score just for that last line about the teeth. LOL having no fear and going all the way then the final line took the whole cake I love it thank you for sharing that was a mighty Hard Punch
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Thanks so much, Mary. I'm glad you got a chuckle from it :) Cheers -- Craig
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Yes I did thanks for sharing
Comment from Rickie1
Nice job. It's the essence of all bar brawls. I've never been in one but I've seen a few.
They are usually over in a few minutes and all you have to do is stay out of the way. I had to look up heath. :-)
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Nice job. It's the essence of all bar brawls. I've never been in one but I've seen a few.
They are usually over in a few minutes and all you have to do is stay out of the way. I had to look up heath. :-)
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Thanks very much, Rickie. I haven't been in a bar fight, either :) Cheers, Craig
Comment from Dawn Munro
AaaaaaaaaaaaaHAHAAAHA!
Your teeth flew far and wide, I fear.
A dental bill will set you straight,
and I won't shed a single tear!
In fights you can't participate! :))
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AaaaaaaaaaaaaHAHAAAHA!
Your teeth flew far and wide, I fear.
A dental bill will set you straight,
and I won't shed a single tear!
In fights you can't participate! :))
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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LOL
How do we give a review a six? Your poem is better than mine, so it's deserving of one.
Thanks, Dawn :)
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HAHAHAHA! Is not! But thanx. :)))