Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What a great entry, sir! It has originality, it has depth of imagination, and most of all, it has character! :) :) So much fun with the word 'otacust' paired with Bambi! :) Thanx for sharing and good luck in the contest! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018

Thank you, Yvette, for the lovely and enthusiastic comments. I appreciate the good wishes, too :) Craig

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

It looks like both of them are enjoying the eavesdropping process, even though it looks more like picking nits. lol My guess is they don't gossip after they've eavesdropped.

Excellent entry into the 3 line contest, Craig. I wish you much luck with the committee.

Gloria

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018

Oh, now you're just nit-picking!

Thanks muchly, Gloria.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Good job, Craig, with that unusual word. Your picture is super. Thanks for the notes, too. Animals are much smarter than humans give them credit. Your lines flow smoothly with a great message. Thanks for sharing. Jan

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018

They most certainly are, Jan. Much smarter than us, if you ask me. Many thanks for the great comments.