Haiku( Fog)
Haiku Poetry Contest15 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Love the misty, enchanting photo. It frames your poetry very nicely. I can almost feel the drop in temperature. I think I need a hot cocoa!
All my best to you and yours,
Sally
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018
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Love the misty, enchanting photo. It frames your poetry very nicely. I can almost feel the drop in temperature. I think I need a hot cocoa!
All my best to you and yours,
Sally
Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018
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Great review -thanks for those encouraging words zanya
Comment from Deb Kincaid
Exquisite! So much meaning in so few words. An excellent 5-7-5 poem, but a wonderful haiku as well. I appreciated not only the way it rolls gently off the tongue, but its truthfulness: November fog really does harken that winter's on its way. The image you chose to accompany the text couldn't be more perfect. This is lovely work, and I hope to read more of your poetry. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018
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Exquisite! So much meaning in so few words. An excellent 5-7-5 poem, but a wonderful haiku as well. I appreciated not only the way it rolls gently off the tongue, but its truthfulness: November fog really does harken that winter's on its way. The image you chose to accompany the text couldn't be more perfect. This is lovely work, and I hope to read more of your poetry. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018
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Superb review zanya
Comment from Donka Kristeva
I love it! In the bleakness of November with fog and bare trees, there seem to be no life and no joy. Yet there is comfort and mystery, and I can read them in your words. The art work is made for the poem.
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018
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I love it! In the bleakness of November with fog and bare trees, there seem to be no life and no joy. Yet there is comfort and mystery, and I can read them in your words. The art work is made for the poem.
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018
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Great review zanya
Comment from Trenton Stinchfield
I LOVE the image you paint with this.. Please please please keep up the good work. I don't even see anything wrong with this, maybe fix the caps in the first line, but like whoop keep it up I love it. 7/6 stars.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018
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I LOVE the image you paint with this.. Please please please keep up the good work. I don't even see anything wrong with this, maybe fix the caps in the first line, but like whoop keep it up I love it. 7/6 stars.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018
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Great review and again thanks for those 6 stars zanya
Comment from donette1914
very well written as a sign of winter on its way
you write very well with well-chosen words
it runs very smoothly
very talented and thank you for sharing
it was a pleasure I hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 oct 26 2018
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018
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very well written as a sign of winter on its way
you write very well with well-chosen words
it runs very smoothly
very talented and thank you for sharing
it was a pleasure I hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 oct 26 2018
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018
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And thanks for reading and positive review zanya