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Comment from phill doran
Hello Bill
Well, not really an 'outstanding' piece of poetry in a literary sense but one I did readily enjoy and such a fanciful and humorous piece: there will be several of the more fragile senior citizens of this parish suffering renal shutdowns when they read the title - and that too merits the extra star.
Very funny - and a pleasant change from the doom and gloom
I wish you well with your continued writing
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Hello Bill
Well, not really an 'outstanding' piece of poetry in a literary sense but one I did readily enjoy and such a fanciful and humorous piece: there will be several of the more fragile senior citizens of this parish suffering renal shutdowns when they read the title - and that too merits the extra star.
Very funny - and a pleasant change from the doom and gloom
I wish you well with your continued writing
cheers
phill
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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I?m shocked at the six, Phil. I?m not promoting cat de-tailing, but simply warning the general public that the farmer?s wife is showing #signs of antisocial behavior that may need to be addressed.
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You are a Public Servant, Bill.
One day, they will build a statue to you.
Until then, you must soldier on with your work...
Cats everywhere, if not farmers too, salute you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, is the cat next? You had me scared here Bill, forever teasing us with your tales! In this case mice tails! He he he, a fun write, love Dolly x
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Oh my goodness, is the cat next? You had me scared here Bill, forever teasing us with your tales! In this case mice tails! He he he, a fun write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Dolly. The farmer?s wife is a bit psychotic. .
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, this is a different interpretation of the classic nursery rhyme, Bill. Good job on the style of the 575. The picture is great. So the angry farmer's wife killed the mice, but wanted to fid the kitty to blame it on, OR kill the kitty for not getting rid of the mice. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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Well, this is a different interpretation of the classic nursery rhyme, Bill. Good job on the style of the 575. The picture is great. So the angry farmer's wife killed the mice, but wanted to fid the kitty to blame it on, OR kill the kitty for not getting rid of the mice. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from giraffmang
Hopefully the cat is next on the menu rather than simply getting a tasty treat... Not a fan of the felines...
Well written little piece.
GMG
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Hopefully the cat is next on the menu rather than simply getting a tasty treat... Not a fan of the felines...
Well written little piece.
GMG
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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I saw a cat that had been run over on the side of the highway. I hoped someone would remove it, so other cats wouldn?t know it was a kill zone.