A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
Viewing comments for Chapter 343 "Night terrors"A collection of poems showcasing unusual words
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, I knew with the LGM in the description box what this was going to be about. You did a great job, Craig. This reminded me of those that claim they were abducted by aliens. I like the rhymes, the smooth flow, and the storyline. Good job and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
Haha, I knew with the LGM in the description box what this was going to be about. You did a great job, Craig. This reminded me of those that claim they were abducted by aliens. I like the rhymes, the smooth flow, and the storyline. Good job and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 08-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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Thanks very much, Jan. I am most appreciative of your fun review. Craig
Comment from Debbie Pope
Oh boy. Another poem of beer and drunken debauchery. You know how I love them. And no, I do not believe that you suffer from such a condition. If you did, you could not write such wonderful poetry.
As to your new word, did you think of "hitting the sauce?" And, do you believe in alien beings, even a little? You seem to have thought out so many matters, I intend to ask your opinion on such things as they come up. It will help me form my wishy washy opinions.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
Oh boy. Another poem of beer and drunken debauchery. You know how I love them. And no, I do not believe that you suffer from such a condition. If you did, you could not write such wonderful poetry.
As to your new word, did you think of "hitting the sauce?" And, do you believe in alien beings, even a little? You seem to have thought out so many matters, I intend to ask your opinion on such things as they come up. It will help me form my wishy washy opinions.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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I wish I had thought of that (hitting the sauce), Debbie. I think, given the unimaginably huge number of worlds in the universe, it would be most surprising if we were alone in the cosmos. However, I'm really, really skeptical of the idea that some super-intelligent race, with technology far in advance of anything we have managed, travelled many trillions of miles (at the very least) to visit us, but forgot to check the brakes before they left home, and crash landed in one of our deserts. Then again, I enjoy the X-Files as much as the next guy ;-)
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That's how I feel about it, too. Now. :)
Comment from Michele Harber
This poem is very funny and a lot of fun to read - as are your comments at the end. The story lays out perfectly as a "true" space invaders tale, making the stanza about the possible causes of this "sighting" completely unexpected, and greatly appreciated for its humor. Your poem reads smoothly, and your rhymes are spot on.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
This poem is very funny and a lot of fun to read - as are your comments at the end. The story lays out perfectly as a "true" space invaders tale, making the stanza about the possible causes of this "sighting" completely unexpected, and greatly appreciated for its humor. Your poem reads smoothly, and your rhymes are spot on.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review, Michele. I'm glad you enjoyed this silly little poem :) Cheers, Craig
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Sometimes the "silly little poems" are the most fun.
Comment from Sugarray77
Well.... another fun word from you magic poetical book.. Where would we have been this year without this fun thing to look forward to. A saucerian, I believe they hail from Roswell, New Mexico. Thanks for a cute and well crafted verse.
Melissa
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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
Well.... another fun word from you magic poetical book.. Where would we have been this year without this fun thing to look forward to. A saucerian, I believe they hail from Roswell, New Mexico. Thanks for a cute and well crafted verse.
Melissa
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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Thanks so much, Melissa. I do believe that is the "Mecca" for those who like their close encounters of the alien kind :) Cheers, Craig
Comment from RodG
I love how you play with words in your poems. In this sonnet you have characterized the saucerian very well. I especially like how he describes what he allegedly saw--both the ship and its actions with the tractor beam. Just the right amount of tongue-in-cheek. Rod
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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
I love how you play with words in your poems. In this sonnet you have characterized the saucerian very well. I especially like how he describes what he allegedly saw--both the ship and its actions with the tractor beam. Just the right amount of tongue-in-cheek. Rod
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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Thanks so much, Rod. I'm grateful that you've taken time to check out a number of my offerings over the year, which will be drawing to a close soon. Much appreciation, Craig
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I?m already anticipating the next. Rod