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A collection of poems showcasing unusual words

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Comment from strandregs
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You did well
Cleaned it up
usurped the slime
bounded along
and your math is
flawlessly floor less.
now I know I'm a scurryfunge expert.
amazing how a man can do a 2 hour job in 5 mis. :-))Z.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    LOL Z. Thanks for the fun comments. Craig
Comment from Debbie Pope
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I love your monolimerick. This poem deserves a six star for all the algebra work that you put into it. You have just gone down in FanStory history with your invention. Others will be trying this, but I see this as your area of expertise. No-one has mastered rhymes like you, Craig.
I really like the word scurryfunge. That's how I clean my house. I scurry to throw things into closets for later retrieval. Then I forget where I threw them. Eventually they start to grow fungus.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    I'm going to be majorly disappointed if this doesn't earn me the Nobel Prize in mathematics ;-)

    I see we learned house cleaning at the same school, Debbie.

    Many thanks for the wonderful comments and rating.

    Craig
Comment from rama devi
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What a bizarre word---and you did great with the rhyming! Fine presentaiton too. Good limerick style. Good consonance of F. The reverse syntax works fine and does not sound too forced. This is a fun one!

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    Thanks so much for the lovely comments, RD :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Another unique word and delousing the house of all the grunge is what I try and do all the time and often can't keep up with the dust! He he he, a fun write, much enjoyed, I love that new word too! Just hope I can remember it! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    Our house is quite close to the front fence, and we live on a dirt road, so I appreciate the dust problem, Dolly. Many thanks, Craig
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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CDR, this is a fun little limerick using mono rhyme.
A clever and descriptive piece on cleaning the house in a hurry.
Inviting people over seems to be the only way the house gets a scurryfunge :-)
Thanks for the entertaining read. ~DD

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    That's what usually works for us, DD. Many thanks, Craig
Comment from Sugarray77
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Craig, you have written a very clever and witty limerick. Too cute. It is amazing that there are so many nonsense words out there. You did a good job presenting this one.

Melissa

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    Thanks so much, Melissa. Writing about cleaning is so much easier than actually doing it ;-) Cheers, Craig
Comment from yespabee
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Lovely poem with the simplicity with a scurryfunge reference to the used rhyming there. Interesting algebra, cannot be challenged. Ready to clean the house.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    When you're finished, can you clean mine too, please? Many thanks for the lovely comments. Craig
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Limerick. That is exactly what my daughter and I will be doing for the next few days, cleaning properly, no more scurryfunge, scrubbing the coaches and she is washing the carpets.

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 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    We've had our big clean-up, fortunately... now it's just a matter of trying to keep it in reasonable order for a while. Many thanks, Sandra.
Comment from kahpot
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What a brilliant (Limerick) poem, and read, I love the word of the day, you have made it fit in and also sounds like it is a word that I would pass to someone else, I hate cleaning, very well done****kahpot

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 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    Thanks very much for the kind assessment. I share your dislike of cleaning. One of life's necessary evils. Cheers, Craig