Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hey Craig. I enjoyed this short and sweet limerick you graced us with today. Good job on the format and presentation... I especially liked that you applied doniferous to Santa Claus.... he arrives tonight!!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018

Yay, I was expecting coal, but instead I got half a TV! ;-)

Thanks for the kind comments, Melissa, and have a wonderful day!

Craig

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Christmas Limerick while we wait for Santa to appear we sing a few songs to draw him near and get the Christmas cheer in our hearts.

MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018

Thanks so much for the kind seasonal wishes, Sandra. Hope you and yours have a wonderful Christmas. Craig

Comment from --Turtle.

Excellent

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I can't believe it's already Christmas eve.
Soon, I'll be doniferously holding a jolly bag of merry toilet paper in one hand, and a sack of cookies in the other.

I read through this poem this morning, sneaking to my computer before the madness begins.

I had to look up vociferous, but thought you did an awesome job rhyming doniferous and keeping to theme. A challenge... doniferous, vociferous, coniferous.

Also fun, and pleasing to the ear. The tone of the poem has a narrator's voice... like one who that introduces a christmas cartoon before the cartoon gets going.

You got this. What's seven days compared to the three hundred and fifty something you got under your belt.


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 Comment Written 24-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018

I wouldn't be the first to collapse metres from the end, with the finish line in sight, Turtle... but hopefully that won't happen :)

Thanks once again for your support all year. I imagine this is an insanely busy time for you, but I hope to get the chance to work more on your own writing in the New Year.

All the best, Craig

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Lol Craig. I will not recognize you without a new word. Christmas tomorrow. I guess 99% of us will be doniferous.
Vociferous he is indeed. But two word vocabulary besides reindeer names. Ho and On. Ho Ho Ho and On Dasher, on Blitzen. Merry Christmas, Craig. Thank you for sharing

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 Comment Written 24-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018

Haha, you're quite right, Pam. A most limited vocabulary. Many thanks for your support through this seemingly endless project, and Merry Christmas! Cheers, Craig