A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
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Comment from lyenochka
Such a fun word - "yule hole" - seems like elastic may reduce the need for this word. Thanks for sharing this holiday phenomenon - we're often not in our normal routines in parties and more desserts. We eating with what the grand kids like best so it may require yole-hole adjusting.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Such a fun word - "yule hole" - seems like elastic may reduce the need for this word. Thanks for sharing this holiday phenomenon - we're often not in our normal routines in parties and more desserts. We eating with what the grand kids like best so it may require yole-hole adjusting.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Yes, it is fun, isn't it? Although to me it sounds just a little riqsue. Many thanks for the lovely, glowing stars and the great comments, Helen.
Cheers,
Craig
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You're most welcome! Enjoyed the poem, Craig.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, Craig, this refers to anyone who overdoes it regardless of whether they use a belt or not. It is so easy to overindulge. Good job on the rhymes and good flow. Your words describe this word in context well. The picture is perfect--unfortunately. Good job and thanks for sharing. You have done an extraordinary job with your project as it nears the end. Congratulations. Jan
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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Yes, Craig, this refers to anyone who overdoes it regardless of whether they use a belt or not. It is so easy to overindulge. Good job on the rhymes and good flow. Your words describe this word in context well. The picture is perfect--unfortunately. Good job and thanks for sharing. You have done an extraordinary job with your project as it nears the end. Congratulations. Jan
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Comment Written 25-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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It's far too easy. I don't overdo it to the point of making myself sick, but I'll admit, I do pick at junk most of the day, and don't do my waistline a whole lot of good! Thanks for the lovely words of encouragement, Jan.
Cheers,
Craig