Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very good image and presentation, Craig.
-Notes are appreciated.
-Your acrostic is written very well
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-The comparison between the cold
and the failure of the relationship
is very good.
-I particularly like the first line, and
the one about the tide.
-A good conclusion, as well.
-Thanks for sharing and Happy New Year!

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 Comment Written 28-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018

Thanks so much for the detailed (and kind) comments, Pam -- they are most appreciated. Happy New Year to you as well!

Craig

reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Dec-2018

You are very welcome, Craig.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I loved this smooth acrostic with chilling sentiments, perfectly rhymed and you made your point clearly here about a failed relationship. Likened to an icy touch, your write deserves a six, but sadly I never have enough, a very talented write with a superb presentation, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 28-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018

Your kind words are reward enough, Dolly. Thanks so much, have a wonderful day! Craig