Fresh Ideas
a 20 syllable poem24 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
Fresh ideas are always good to have in mind for writing. You never know when they will come in handy on the spur of the moment. Nice work up for this short and sweet poem.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Fresh ideas are always good to have in mind for writing. You never know when they will come in handy on the spur of the moment. Nice work up for this short and sweet poem.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Barbara. I appreciate your wonderful review and comments.
Melissa
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Comment from CD Richards
I think the competition is going to be fierce for this contest. I've only read a couple of entries so far, but they have both been top notch. Wonderful choice of image to back up your excellent points. Best of luck, Craig
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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I think the competition is going to be fierce for this contest. I've only read a couple of entries so far, but they have both been top notch. Wonderful choice of image to back up your excellent points. Best of luck, Craig
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Craig...
Melissa
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
A breathe of fresh air and inspiration are all inside your poem. I love the topic and your word choices. Small poems are so challenging, and you've met the obstacle with ease. :) Happy New Year and keep writing. This was a joy to read. Great contest entry. Good luck.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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A breathe of fresh air and inspiration are all inside your poem. I love the topic and your word choices. Small poems are so challenging, and you've met the obstacle with ease. :) Happy New Year and keep writing. This was a joy to read. Great contest entry. Good luck.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello,
Happy new year to you! I enjoyed reading your poem today :) I had to count your syllables twice. For me, I have to make myself say ideas with three syllables to make it work. We all pronounce things differently, and that is just fine with me. I like your message as we begin a new writing year. It will be fun to find out what fellow fanstorians will put out there in 2019. Let the rankings game begin.
Best wishes to you in this contest. You have a wonderful message.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Hello,
Happy new year to you! I enjoyed reading your poem today :) I had to count your syllables twice. For me, I have to make myself say ideas with three syllables to make it work. We all pronounce things differently, and that is just fine with me. I like your message as we begin a new writing year. It will be fun to find out what fellow fanstorians will put out there in 2019. Let the rankings game begin.
Best wishes to you in this contest. You have a wonderful message.
Joy xx
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Hi,Joy... having a restricted syllable count is a challenge when trying to make something sound meaningful and have good sense too. I truly thank you for your lovely review.
Melissa
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hey, now there's a wonderful write that should serve as bountiful inspiration for all FanStorians!! :) ;) Great insight in only twenty words...almost a 'go forth and write' command for the masses! :) Good luck in the contest! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Hey, now there's a wonderful write that should serve as bountiful inspiration for all FanStorians!! :) ;) Great insight in only twenty words...almost a 'go forth and write' command for the masses! :) Good luck in the contest! :) Yvette
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Hi Yvette, I am glad you chose to review and comment. I always look forward to reading what you have to say. Thanks a bunch!
Melissa
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Melissa. Your picture and words pair nicely with a great message. Good job on the syllable count. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Melissa. Your picture and words pair nicely with a great message. Good job on the syllable count. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Jan, thanks for the great review.
Melissa
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty syllable poem about seeking for fresh ideas to write about. When we just open a window and take a deep breath of fresh air, we will be surprised what we will be able to create,
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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A very well-written twenty syllable poem about seeking for fresh ideas to write about. When we just open a window and take a deep breath of fresh air, we will be surprised what we will be able to create,
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Sandra, thanks so much for the lovely review.
Melissa
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a very well-written poem with great imagery. You've summed up how the writing journey begins in very few words. What I perfect time for this poem the first day of the new year. Great job as always.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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This is a very well-written poem with great imagery. You've summed up how the writing journey begins in very few words. What I perfect time for this poem the first day of the new year. Great job as always.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Mistydawn. I am grateful and enjoyed reading your comments.
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
Great use of your 20 syllables. You make writing sound like a magical experience. Just open the mind's window. You mention observe, and that's so important. You have a great ability to do that. I think writing does take a certain amount of bravery, because you don't know how your work will be received. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Great use of your 20 syllables. You make writing sound like a magical experience. Just open the mind's window. You mention observe, and that's so important. You have a great ability to do that. I think writing does take a certain amount of bravery, because you don't know how your work will be received. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Hello, Judi. I enjoyed reading your review. Thanks for the encouragement you give me. I value it highly!!!
Melissa
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You're very welcome. Such a thoughtful verse. judi
Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa,
Looking out into our universe (from likely high above the Earth from a church attic), your illustration is eerily spiritual.
But oft, all souls are not so brave (-;
Liked: waft
Best wishes in our New Year.
Mark
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Melissa,
Looking out into our universe (from likely high above the Earth from a church attic), your illustration is eerily spiritual.
But oft, all souls are not so brave (-;
Liked: waft
Best wishes in our New Year.
Mark
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Mark, for your meaningful review.
Melissa