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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the aliteration and sounds here the reality is sometimes far from romantic in a marriage! But passing wind is part of life! He he he, a fun write Bill, love Dolly x
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I enjoyed the aliteration and sounds here the reality is sometimes far from romantic in a marriage! But passing wind is part of life! He he he, a fun write Bill, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Teresa Alford
Hahah you have a wonderful sense of humor. It is very clever to have a two person conversation going on within a poem. As I always say to you, "Well done." Keep it up. Write On! TA ";-)
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Hahah you have a wonderful sense of humor. It is very clever to have a two person conversation going on within a poem. As I always say to you, "Well done." Keep it up. Write On! TA ";-)
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Thanks, TA
Comment from WryWriter
This is just too, too, too funny!! This oddball poem has a great rhyming "flow." I love the way you used font colors to indicate different speakers. Some prosody (fly, I) ("I" counts, I suppose? Same vowel sound but not really a change in consonant--no consonant.) Who would have thought to rhyme "flatulence" with "hence"? Great job!
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This is just too, too, too funny!! This oddball poem has a great rhyming "flow." I love the way you used font colors to indicate different speakers. Some prosody (fly, I) ("I" counts, I suppose? Same vowel sound but not really a change in consonant--no consonant.) Who would have thought to rhyme "flatulence" with "hence"? Great job!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
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Thanks, WW, for the exceptional, enthusiastic, and specific review. Bill
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. I think she would be complimented? Or perhaps Shakespeare would make it more as a reason for an honest view of the beloved no matter if she has gas issues.
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Lol. I think she would be complimented? Or perhaps Shakespeare would make it more as a reason for an honest view of the beloved no matter if she has gas issues.
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
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Thanks, lyenochka, for the upbeat review. Bill
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
ALOL! This is priceless. I declare it the winner. Of course, the committee does not have my ultra-sophisticated taste, so once again you will be passed over. After you die, they'll give you a lifetime achievement award to pacify your heirs, who I hope will riot in the street outside the Academy. I'll be leading them...or rather, my ghost will be. :)
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ALOL! This is priceless. I declare it the winner. Of course, the committee does not have my ultra-sophisticated taste, so once again you will be passed over. After you die, they'll give you a lifetime achievement award to pacify your heirs, who I hope will riot in the street outside the Academy. I'll be leading them...or rather, my ghost will be. :)
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
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I am so glad you liked this, Phyllis. You are the best writer on this site. Your review means a lot to me. Bill