Poems
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Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Bill,
Very nicely done!
And a great contest entry.
Nothing out of place here to suggest that you consider reworking or improving upon.
Thank you for your author's notes. I had no idea what the poem was about until I found your notes.
Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Jan
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
Hi Bill,
Very nicely done!
And a great contest entry.
Nothing out of place here to suggest that you consider reworking or improving upon.
Thank you for your author's notes. I had no idea what the poem was about until I found your notes.
Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Jan
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Jan
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Well done. Acrostics often sound forced, but this one doesn't. Good message. I never knew that about the Jewish people. What a good idea. Without their endless burden, they can be more productive in ways that add to society as a whole. :)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
Well done. Acrostics often sound forced, but this one doesn't. Good message. I never knew that about the Jewish people. What a good idea. Without their endless burden, they can be more productive in ways that add to society as a whole. :)
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Phyllis
Comment from Dorinda Palmisano
What a great message given in such a wonderful way. It reads as if the format just happened after you wrote this. It didn't seem forced as some of this genre can.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
What a great message given in such a wonderful way. It reads as if the format just happened after you wrote this. It didn't seem forced as some of this genre can.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Dorinda
Comment from Miss Sherry
What a fascinating write! I learned something new today. Freedom from sin - does that include chocolate addiction? Seriously - this is a great write that I really like.
Kudos and blessings!
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
What a fascinating write! I learned something new today. Freedom from sin - does that include chocolate addiction? Seriously - this is a great write that I really like.
Kudos and blessings!
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Sherry
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You are welcome!!