Fearless Flying
(A layover with Captain Ted.)11 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
You've certainly gone to town on this one. I remember the cartoon of Fly United, with two ducks, one's beak up the other's arse. For me, this graphic exposition was saved by the awful pun in the middle: "all this sentimentality
turns me semi-mental to a 'T'"
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reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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You've certainly gone to town on this one. I remember the cartoon of Fly United, with two ducks, one's beak up the other's arse. For me, this graphic exposition was saved by the awful pun in the middle: "all this sentimentality
turns me semi-mental to a 'T'"
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Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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You are the first one to be brave enough to review this, so thanks for that. The challenge was for adult theme, so I sat on it for a while, then added the twist.
