Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Wow -- this is quite an awesome offering for the romance contest... really carries an impactful message! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019

Thanks so much! I appreciate your taking time to check it out and I am honored by a review from an awesome poet as yourself! Happy 4th!

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Very well presented, the words and artwork blend excellently, you have said a great deal here, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019

Thank you so much! Really appreciate you took time to check it out and respond!

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I know this is a 5-7-5 poem and you had to adhere to a strict syllable count but the second line seems squished up with the third line. It seems there should be a comma between bound and for in order for this to make sense to me. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019

Thank you so much! I wondered about that myself so I really appreciate that you concur and I?m going to add that now