Wee Bumblebee
A Minute Poem16 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Author, this is a lovely minute poem about the ever sweet bee and you have no used a single letter A that I can see.
Very cute poem and best of luck to you in the contest. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Author, this is a lovely minute poem about the ever sweet bee and you have no used a single letter A that I can see.
Very cute poem and best of luck to you in the contest. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a wonderful Minute poem on the prompt, "Life Without the Letter A." Super descriptions. With a pen name of BeasPeas, of course, I have to admire the Bees. That's not the reason for my rating, though. An excellent piece. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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This is a wonderful Minute poem on the prompt, "Life Without the Letter A." Super descriptions. With a pen name of BeasPeas, of course, I have to admire the Bees. That's not the reason for my rating, though. An excellent piece. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I love minute poems! Yours is appealing to all ages. The only thing I was not sure about was why Wee Bumblebee was capitalized. But it is clever, cute, and fits the form. It seems the latest style is to use minimal punctuation, so I won't comment on that.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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I love minute poems! Yours is appealing to all ages. The only thing I was not sure about was why Wee Bumblebee was capitalized. But it is clever, cute, and fits the form. It seems the latest style is to use minimal punctuation, so I won't comment on that.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for the lovely review. Wee Bumblebee is his name... like Yogi Bear or Daffy Duck, etc. I know I should use more punctuation, but I seem to think that it flows smoother without it in this form. Just my opinion. Thanks bunches!
Comment from Eve Vasa
Good job meeting the criteria for this prompt. And I love the presentation also. Lovely font and picture, and the poem is sweet and flowing. Thanks for sharing it and all the best with this work, cheers, Eve.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Good job meeting the criteria for this prompt. And I love the presentation also. Lovely font and picture, and the poem is sweet and flowing. Thanks for sharing it and all the best with this work, cheers, Eve.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
What a sweet Minute poem! And written minus the letter "A!"
Bumblebee and I are long-acquainted!
I see that you have posted this offering as "general fiction." Perhaps you may want to revisit that category.
Best Wishes!
diane
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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer!
What a sweet Minute poem! And written minus the letter "A!"
Bumblebee and I are long-acquainted!
I see that you have posted this offering as "general fiction." Perhaps you may want to revisit that category.
Best Wishes!
diane
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Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank you. Which category should I use?
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I would just place it in General Poetry...
I see that the prompt states to "Write a story or poem," but since you chose to write your wonderful offering as a Minute Poem, I would go with General Poetry...
Comment from Raul1
This is a very good writing prompt. I wish you good luck in the contest! You caught the way a bumblebee acts. No grammatical errors. Well written! Nice work.
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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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This is a very good writing prompt. I wish you good luck in the contest! You caught the way a bumblebee acts. No grammatical errors. Well written! Nice work.
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Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much!
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You're welcome!