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Ruffle Some Feathers contest entry27 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
Well, it seems as if your words might ruffle a few feathers, but since it's a prompt for a contest I think they'll understand. For every stanza you talked about I could think of a poem that I've recently read that I felt that way too LOL good job!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Well, it seems as if your words might ruffle a few feathers, but since it's a prompt for a contest I think they'll understand. For every stanza you talked about I could think of a poem that I've recently read that I felt that way too LOL good job!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Lol. Yep, they're out there. Thank you for the fantastic review, Patty. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Ron
Comment from RodG
Ouch! This Speaker leaves no one on this site unscathed and not a topic goes uncursed. Frankly, what he says has much merit. I love the sardonic tone of voice employed. Rod
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Ouch! This Speaker leaves no one on this site unscathed and not a topic goes uncursed. Frankly, what he says has much merit. I love the sardonic tone of voice employed. Rod
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Rod. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Ron
Comment from Gloria ....
You have some nerve! Now you've reminded me I entered this contest and must think of something to write about. Maybe the stars or the moon, or the garden. hahaaaa JK
This is great and might ruffle a feather or two.
Great job and best of luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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You have some nerve! Now you've reminded me I entered this contest and must think of something to write about. Maybe the stars or the moon, or the garden. hahaaaa JK
This is great and might ruffle a feather or two.
Great job and best of luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Gloria. Yeah, I'm sure something with gardens or the moon will be a big hit after they read this stupid thing. Haha. I'm glad you liked this silliness, G. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. Have a great night.
Ron
Comment from Pantygynt
The real laugh here is the truth of the the thing. If your readers can't see themselves, or rather the crap they've written in this somewhere, they will have a great future ahead because they must be the most original poets ever. Of course I realise you don't mean it -- well -- most of the time or perhaps just some of the time but if I ever come across another poem about %)£$@#"!% and how awfullovelysad it is I shall join you in a long loud aaaaaiiiieeee! (That by the way was the sound made by villains when pitched over the cliff edge in a comic book of the 1950s -- every week).
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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The real laugh here is the truth of the the thing. If your readers can't see themselves, or rather the crap they've written in this somewhere, they will have a great future ahead because they must be the most original poets ever. Of course I realise you don't mean it -- well -- most of the time or perhaps just some of the time but if I ever come across another poem about %)£$@#"!% and how awfullovelysad it is I shall join you in a long loud aaaaaiiiieeee! (That by the way was the sound made by villains when pitched over the cliff edge in a comic book of the 1950s -- every week).
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Hahaha. Yeah, I've seen aaaaiiiieeeee a few times. Lol. Thank you for the fantastic review, Pantygynt. I tried to make sure I covered most the basis there, leaving little left. Haha. I appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness. have a great night.
Ron
Comment from dragonpoet
You make fun of almost all the possible things that inspire writers to write.
I hope you like something you read on line or there is no reason to be here (ha ha). Unless you think those lame writers you rhyme about can learn from you. Though I think we all learn from each other.
Good luck and keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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You make fun of almost all the possible things that inspire writers to write.
I hope you like something you read on line or there is no reason to be here (ha ha). Unless you think those lame writers you rhyme about can learn from you. Though I think we all learn from each other.
Good luck and keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Joan. Yeah, I tried to cover everything I could think of at the time, haha. It didn't leave much room for anything else, that's for sure. Thank you for the great review and gracious stars. Joan. Have a wonderful night.
Ron
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You're welcome on all accounts.
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
Comment from juliaSjames
What can I say my poet friend?
You've put it all to rhyme
My tears fall like the morning rain
My heart's a tuneless chime.
But lo! I see a ray of light
For searching through your verse
It's clear you overlooked haiku
Let one hand clap ... or worse.
You've set the bar for this limbo dance poetic contest. After this, how looooow can they gooo!
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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What can I say my poet friend?
You've put it all to rhyme
My tears fall like the morning rain
My heart's a tuneless chime.
But lo! I see a ray of light
For searching through your verse
It's clear you overlooked haiku
Let one hand clap ... or worse.
You've set the bar for this limbo dance poetic contest. After this, how looooow can they gooo!
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Haha, let one hand clap...or worse. Thank you for the excellent review, Julia. I really appreciate the generous stars. Yes, I set the bar fairly low. hehe. have a wonderful night, J.
Ron
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You too, Ron.
Julia
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I understand where you are coming from DS. You did a great job with the prompt. I'm not offended just amused. You touched on the subjects many enjoy writing about in a complaining way as the prompt required. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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I understand where you are coming from DS. You did a great job with the prompt. I'm not offended just amused. You touched on the subjects many enjoy writing about in a complaining way as the prompt required. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Jan. I appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Ron
Comment from humpwhistle
Audacity is under-appreciated these day.
You calls 'em as you see 'em.
As I search for fodder to review, I usually find that--fodder.
I, a writer of (mostly) prose, have escaped your skilled, yet scornful eye.
I believe I'd rather not poke the bear.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Audacity is under-appreciated these day.
You calls 'em as you see 'em.
As I search for fodder to review, I usually find that--fodder.
I, a writer of (mostly) prose, have escaped your skilled, yet scornful eye.
I believe I'd rather not poke the bear.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Haha. Yeah, this is mainly directed at poetry. I just couldn't resist. Lol. Thank you for the fantastic review and the big sixer, Lee. I really appreciate the generous rating, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great night. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I made it through this entire travesty before I puked up my guts! Just kidding! I only barfed a little. This is quite a list you've come up with. I'm trying to make a list of topics you like to read about Struggling . . . .! LOL!
Very creative
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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I made it through this entire travesty before I puked up my guts! Just kidding! I only barfed a little. This is quite a list you've come up with. I'm trying to make a list of topics you like to read about Struggling . . . .! LOL!
Very creative
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Lol. Yeah, there's not much left after all these, that's for sure. It's all of them I could think of at the time. I tried to cover them all. Haha. Thank you for the great review, Janice. I'm glad you liked this silliness. have a wonderful night.
Ron
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I made it through this entire travesty before I puked up my guts! Just kidding! I only barfed a little. This is quite a list you've come up with. I'm trying to make a list of topics you like to read about Struggling . . . .! LOL!
Very creative
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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I made it through this entire travesty before I puked up my guts! Just kidding! I only barfed a little. This is quite a list you've come up with. I'm trying to make a list of topics you like to read about Struggling . . . .! LOL!
Very creative
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Looks like this was a duplicate review, J. Thank you again.
;)
Ron