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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Rain on a tin roof"Poems not in other books
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Comment from susand3022
Is there anything better than being in a cabin with the rain falling on a summer day, or night? Well, I don't think so. I, personally, love the smell of the earth after the summer rain, and I love the sound of it on the roof. This was a really sweet reminder of that. :)
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Is there anything better than being in a cabin with the rain falling on a summer day, or night? Well, I don't think so. I, personally, love the smell of the earth after the summer rain, and I love the sound of it on the roof. This was a really sweet reminder of that. :)
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Thanks so much for the lovely comments. The smell after a rain shower is also wonderful. Do I feel another poem coming on? Most grateful, Craig
Comment from Sugarray77
Excellent job, Craig. You verse bring to mind the memory of hearing the sound of that type of rain. It also lets us know that you enjoy the simple things. Well done on this.
Melissa
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Excellent job, Craig. You verse bring to mind the memory of hearing the sound of that type of rain. It also lets us know that you enjoy the simple things. Well done on this.
Melissa
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Thanks very much for the lovely comments, Melissa. Cheers, Craig
Comment from tfawcus
It's certainly sweet music when it comes. You'll have been having a bit of it out your way this winter, I expect. We've even got a puddle in the bottom of our dam.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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It's certainly sweet music when it comes. You'll have been having a bit of it out your way this winter, I expect. We've even got a puddle in the bottom of our dam.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Not enough of it, Tony -- our dam is bone dry. That seems to be a permanent condition now. I cart water from the council bore, summer and winter, just enough to keep our critters alive. Glad to hear you've had more luck. Cheers, Craig
Comment from Ricky1024
Rain on a tin roof is a 15 syllable contest poem and tree rich and theme and imagery red and flowed well with no grammar issues descriptive measures aligned perfectly have a wonderful day and good luck with this.
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Rain on a tin roof is a 15 syllable contest poem and tree rich and theme and imagery red and flowed well with no grammar issues descriptive measures aligned perfectly have a wonderful day and good luck with this.
Dr. Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Thanks for the kind words, most appreciated. Craig
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with these words! You brought the rain tapping to my ears in this post, it is a soothing sound that sends you to sleep! Why is that? I enjoyed your words here, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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I so agree with these words! You brought the rain tapping to my ears in this post, it is a soothing sound that sends you to sleep! Why is that? I enjoyed your words here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Thanks so much, Dolly. Most grateful, Craig.