To My Secret Admirer
Response to Love Letter on a Clipboard31 total reviews
Comment from Louise Michelle
This is absolutely charming, Sally. You selected your words carefully, keeping the reader engrossed in your protagonist's emotions and thoughts.
I like the format you chose to write this - letter form - it kept the storyline immediate. And last, but not least, it just drips with good old fashioned, heart warming happiness. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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This is absolutely charming, Sally. You selected your words carefully, keeping the reader engrossed in your protagonist's emotions and thoughts.
I like the format you chose to write this - letter form - it kept the storyline immediate. And last, but not least, it just drips with good old fashioned, heart warming happiness. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thank you, sweet lady. I appreciate the superb marks and kind comments. I love to spread happiness and we sure need some these days. These two stories will run in tandem until Christmas Eve Eve. I hope you?ll stay with me. Thank you again for your generous review and shower of stars!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Janetsue
This is labeled fiction, but it could actually be a reality for someone. The thought of a wonderful secret admirer is a warm fuzzy to hold close to one's heart. I totally enjoyed reading this, my friend!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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This is labeled fiction, but it could actually be a reality for someone. The thought of a wonderful secret admirer is a warm fuzzy to hold close to one's heart. I totally enjoyed reading this, my friend!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for the kind review and comments, dear Janet. It is so appreciated. I love to warm hearts.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
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You're very welcome, Sally!!
Comment from Sylvia Page
Hi Sally, this is a great story being unfolded. So there's a secret admirer who combines roses and lavender with a touching love note. And you respond that you too love him even without seeing him? That's blind love. Whatever his looks might be I hope he is of a great virtuous character. You are guessing who he might be, right?
Best
Sylvia
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Hi Sally, this is a great story being unfolded. So there's a secret admirer who combines roses and lavender with a touching love note. And you respond that you too love him even without seeing him? That's blind love. Whatever his looks might be I hope he is of a great virtuous character. You are guessing who he might be, right?
Best
Sylvia
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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I know who the mystery man is, so I?m not worried about the outcome of this lovely love story. I?m glad I have you hooked into this. :+) Thanks so much for your kind review and comments. Sending you my best today as well as always, Sally xo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, this is such a fun back and forth so far!! ;) :) Looks to be a delightful exchange.... maybe we could 'raise the stakes' a throw some little 'gifties' out next... LOL! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Oh, this is such a fun back and forth so far!! ;) :) Looks to be a delightful exchange.... maybe we could 'raise the stakes' a throw some little 'gifties' out next... LOL! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Well, he did leave her a rose tied with lavender on the computer. Be patient, dearest, it?s coming . . . .
So glad you like. Did you notice your cameo role as nurse Yvette? Hugs,
Sal :+))
Comment from Kathleen S.
Well that was very entertaining. The touch of mystery and intrigue in your story is fun. I like the mention of lavender too. Very well written and hopefully will get a response from who you wrote it to back soon if nonfiction. :)
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Well that was very entertaining. The touch of mystery and intrigue in your story is fun. I like the mention of lavender too. Very well written and hopefully will get a response from who you wrote it to back soon if nonfiction. :)
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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This is fiction and a back and forth love story within two letter writing lovers. Love Letter on a Clipboard is his, and To My Secret Admirer is hers, Kristin Spencer?s. These two will run in tandem until Christmas Eve Eve. I?m glad you enjoyed this. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
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I got it now. Thank you. It was enjoyable to read.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello and a wonderful Wednesday to you Sally. I enjoyed your romantic story. Takes me back to when I was a kid and I was writing little love notes to girls. I wasn't as lucky as to get a response like that back though. Good job!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Hello and a wonderful Wednesday to you Sally. I enjoyed your romantic story. Takes me back to when I was a kid and I was writing little love notes to girls. I wasn't as lucky as to get a response like that back though. Good job!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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I think adults have more to offer and hopefully these two won?t waste much time getting together. I?ll speak to the writer. Thanks so much for the wonderful review and gracious stars. It is always so appreciated.
Sally :+)
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Sally,
I didn't write this love letter. I need to make this perfectly clear. I've been married for 44 years, and I'd never break my vows. Sure, I find you attractive, but it's just too late in life for such a big change. LOL!
Nicely penned! But don't be too eager, my dear. Not everyone is as handsome as me, or your husband (for that matter). Leave some mystery there. Hold back. Love is just a game, you know.
Your letter reminded me of a black missionary (actually from Africa) who came to our church years ago. He was telling us how he received a letter from his (future) wife when they began their courtship. They had never actually met each other. He'd read the letter over and over, every chance he got, until the pages began to fray. And then he began to tell us about God's love letter, the Bible. And how we could read it the same way. It was interesting.
There was one spot, a word, that seemed out of place.
"I can wait a little longer for your reveal-- "
"reveal" doesn't seem to fit, the verb as a noun. Can I suggest a few other words? ... debut, appearing, grand entrance, unveiling
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Hi Sally,
I didn't write this love letter. I need to make this perfectly clear. I've been married for 44 years, and I'd never break my vows. Sure, I find you attractive, but it's just too late in life for such a big change. LOL!
Nicely penned! But don't be too eager, my dear. Not everyone is as handsome as me, or your husband (for that matter). Leave some mystery there. Hold back. Love is just a game, you know.
Your letter reminded me of a black missionary (actually from Africa) who came to our church years ago. He was telling us how he received a letter from his (future) wife when they began their courtship. They had never actually met each other. He'd read the letter over and over, every chance he got, until the pages began to fray. And then he began to tell us about God's love letter, the Bible. And how we could read it the same way. It was interesting.
There was one spot, a word, that seemed out of place.
"I can wait a little longer for your reveal-- "
"reveal" doesn't seem to fit, the verb as a noun. Can I suggest a few other words? ... debut, appearing, grand entrance, unveiling
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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I, too, have been married 44 years to my husband Jackson. Our wedding anniversary is in December. Congratulations to you and your wife. That?s a marvelous achievement. I appreciate the excellent review and critique and I will change that word right now. Reveal is a big word right now in the states for some reason. I think unveiling is better here. Thank you, again. I really appreciate it.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally Law :+)
Comment from Sallyo
A lovely response, and of course I'm looking forward to finding out who wrote the original letter. It might be someone she knows well... or not.
There's a missing words- see below.
notices me is new concept
notices me is a new concept
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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A lovely response, and of course I'm looking forward to finding out who wrote the original letter. It might be someone she knows well... or not.
There's a missing words- see below.
notices me is new concept
notices me is a new concept
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and helpful critique. I appreciate your good eyesight and for catching that missing ?a?.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
What a sweet little story this is. I'm glad she finally found her love. It sounds like she needs it.
There must be a reason; or maybe like me,(There must be a reason. Or, maybe like me,)
I enjoyed this one, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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What a sweet little story this is. I'm glad she finally found her love. It sounds like she needs it.
There must be a reason; or maybe like me,(There must be a reason. Or, maybe like me,)
I enjoyed this one, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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My copy editor suggested I changed that to a semicolon, so I did. :+) I originally had a comma there. Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. It?s always so appreciated, dear Debbie. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
A stranger with no identity sends her a love letter and that's all it takes to win her heart? This is a desperate woman! What if he's short, fat, and ugly? Could she make love to him then? There must be a physical attraction, and she has not seen him, so yes, she IS desperate. I hope they are happy together. :)
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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A stranger with no identity sends her a love letter and that's all it takes to win her heart? This is a desperate woman! What if he's short, fat, and ugly? Could she make love to him then? There must be a physical attraction, and she has not seen him, so yes, she IS desperate. I hope they are happy together. :)
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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You?ll see I?m the days ahead as their love letters flow between the two of them, creating a special bond. My husband and I know of this bond. Stay tuned.
Thanks so much for the kind review and comments, Phyllis.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo