The Wind Is But The Messenger
Renewed revelation of sense of self and purpose...15 total reviews
Comment from J W Warner
Really excellent and enjoyable. The narrator's slow realization of her true self, which might lag behind that of a clever reader, was powerfully told. I would certainly say this story would warrant a prize.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Really excellent and enjoyable. The narrator's slow realization of her true self, which might lag behind that of a clever reader, was powerfully told. I would certainly say this story would warrant a prize.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Well, JW, it didn't win, but she pulled in a second...LOL! ;) But I am so very grateful for your awesome, encouraging review and those lovely stars!! ;) This was one of those that almost 'wrote' itself once the words started flowing onto the computer screen... it's times like that that i just let the muses run and I loose the reins!! ;) :) I'm sorry I'm a bit behind on my responses, but first week back from the Break has the teacher playing a little catch up!! ;) :) Take care out there and thank you again! ;) Yvette
Comment from M Milles
Wow, interesting story. Well developed. It's dreadful to see all the suffering and despair that the chaotic storm spilled upon everyone. I found no grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
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Wow, interesting story. Well developed. It's dreadful to see all the suffering and despair that the chaotic storm spilled upon everyone. I found no grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Thank you so very much for your lovely review, M -- and I apologize for the tardiness of this reply -- life happens sometimes (and isn't that just a wonderful thing!)... :) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Ricky1024
"The Wind is but the Messanger'
Was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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"The Wind is but the Messanger'
Was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much for your time and your review!
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. I enjoyed reading it very much. It left me very sad in the beginning until I realized you (your main character) were the messenger for passage. Nicely done.
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. I enjoyed reading it very much. It left me very sad in the beginning until I realized you (your main character) were the messenger for passage. Nicely done.
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review and thoughtful comments!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I thought this was well-written as far as all the elements go for Christian fantasy (or at least, that is what I read into it). I thought it would also have been just as interesting if it were only about rescuing a sea turtle following a storm. The shipwreck was interesting because it seemed there was a woman on board a ship, when traditionally it would have been mostly men. I guess a little more information would help the reader know if it was a modern ship or not. It feels like Chaos is an angel of death, but a very specific kind of natural calamity meant to 'heal them home,' according to the Father mentioned several times in the story. Intriguing entry!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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I thought this was well-written as far as all the elements go for Christian fantasy (or at least, that is what I read into it). I thought it would also have been just as interesting if it were only about rescuing a sea turtle following a storm. The shipwreck was interesting because it seemed there was a woman on board a ship, when traditionally it would have been mostly men. I guess a little more information would help the reader know if it was a modern ship or not. It feels like Chaos is an angel of death, but a very specific kind of natural calamity meant to 'heal them home,' according to the Father mentioned several times in the story. Intriguing entry!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Wow, Crystie!! Your review here is such a wonderfully in-depth one and I'm so very glad you enjoyed it!! ;) It was one of those pieces that kindof just happened as the words flowed onto the screen....not what i had set out to do, but I just follow the muses when they take over like that!! ;) :) Those stars are so very appreciated and I do so apologize for my tardiness in response... life's been a bit nutty for the blonde over here!! ;) ;) Take care of you out there and have a wonderful week! ;) Yvette