Poems
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a complex acrostic and when we finally break out and leave home we find out how hard the world can be, but we soon learn, a poignant poem Bill, love Dolly x
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This sounds like a complex acrostic and when we finally break out and leave home we find out how hard the world can be, but we soon learn, a poignant poem Bill, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Pantygynt
There is a great sadness in this acrostic poem, I felt, as the great adventure crumbles in that final sentence, and the complications appear to ovewhelm her.
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There is a great sadness in this acrostic poem, I felt, as the great adventure crumbles in that final sentence, and the complications appear to ovewhelm her.
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
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The hardest part of growing is knowing when your ahead or behind.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a well penned Acrostic Poem. The content is meaningful and relevant as so many kids leave home and venture out into a cold world they are not prepared to handle. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a well penned Acrostic Poem. The content is meaningful and relevant as so many kids leave home and venture out into a cold world they are not prepared to handle. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Thank you, MA