Wishing Stars
Minute Poetry30 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
Beautifully expressed, and a great entry for the minute poetry contest. Best of luck Your rhyme and flow are outstanding. What a whimsical idea to keep wishes in jars. They represent hope that your dreams will come true, That sounds so much better than a Pandora's box with all the world's troubles in it. Certainly deserving of a 6. Unfortunately, I see mine are all gone. judi
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Beautifully expressed, and a great entry for the minute poetry contest. Best of luck Your rhyme and flow are outstanding. What a whimsical idea to keep wishes in jars. They represent hope that your dreams will come true, That sounds so much better than a Pandora's box with all the world's troubles in it. Certainly deserving of a 6. Unfortunately, I see mine are all gone. judi
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much, Judi!!
Melissa
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from robyn corum
Melissa,
As a rule, I don't like Minute poems. But you've created something rather special in this post. A dreamy thing; wistful and imaginative and full of delight. I can see a wee child capturing fireflies (for some reason) and turning them into something even bigger and better (though that would be hard) with their wonderful creativity. hahaha
The images are beautiful and your presentation is divine. *smile*
Thanks so much for a lovely read! Good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Melissa,
As a rule, I don't like Minute poems. But you've created something rather special in this post. A dreamy thing; wistful and imaginative and full of delight. I can see a wee child capturing fireflies (for some reason) and turning them into something even bigger and better (though that would be hard) with their wonderful creativity. hahaha
The images are beautiful and your presentation is divine. *smile*
Thanks so much for a lovely read! Good luck!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Hi Robyn. I am glad you stopped by to read my whimsical Minute. It is fun to write this form and keep it upbeat and positive. Thanks so much.
Melissa
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your wishful thinking in this Minute poem along with your rhythm and rhymes. The parallel picture you selected is quite intriguing. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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I enjoyed your wishful thinking in this Minute poem along with your rhythm and rhymes. The parallel picture you selected is quite intriguing. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Thank you very much, Joan. :)
Melissa
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, Melissa -- just love this one! You've gently painted a wonderful image for the imagination to latch onto as the eyes look out over the sky and the mind calms itself for the evening... just lovely, my lady!! ;) :) I expect to see this one on the winner's marquis come contest time!! ;) Thanx for sharing such a relaxing and vivid vision!! ;) ) Yvette
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Oh, Melissa -- just love this one! You've gently painted a wonderful image for the imagination to latch onto as the eyes look out over the sky and the mind calms itself for the evening... just lovely, my lady!! ;) :) I expect to see this one on the winner's marquis come contest time!! ;) Thanx for sharing such a relaxing and vivid vision!! ;) ) Yvette
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Hello Yvette. I am so delighted you liked my whimsical Minute poem. Thanks so very much. :)
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
What a gorgeous minute poem! I love your message that we need to release our tight grip on our hopes and dreams and perhaps then they would be realized. Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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What a gorgeous minute poem! I love your message that we need to release our tight grip on our hopes and dreams and perhaps then they would be realized. Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Thank you, sweet Helen!!
Melissa
Comment from royowen
I just love this post Melissa, for those of us who can remember hiding under the bedclothes to keep the imagined nasties away from us, I guess that's why I didn't mind our girls snuggling in our beds with protective parents beside them, I remember sleeping on my own. A wonderfully presented minute poem dear Melissa, a superb effort, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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I just love this post Melissa, for those of us who can remember hiding under the bedclothes to keep the imagined nasties away from us, I guess that's why I didn't mind our girls snuggling in our beds with protective parents beside them, I remember sleeping on my own. A wonderfully presented minute poem dear Melissa, a superb effort, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Hi Roy. Thanks so much, my friend. I am delighted you liked my bit of whimsy!! :)
Melissa
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I did
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written minute poem about our wishes and dreams that sometimes working together to help us enjoy life with whatever we have and hope the bigger dreams will manifest too.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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A very well-written minute poem about our wishes and dreams that sometimes working together to help us enjoy life with whatever we have and hope the bigger dreams will manifest too.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Thank you very much, Sandra!
Melissa
Comment from country ranch writer
We all wish wishes were like fireflies twinkling out into the night going higher and higher glowing like the stars we wish upon each and every night.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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We all wish wishes were like fireflies twinkling out into the night going higher and higher glowing like the stars we wish upon each and every night.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Thanks so much for your great comments!!
Melissa
Comment from damommy
What a lovely Minute poem. And you found the perfect picture to accompany it. It would be nice to have a jar of stars under the bed to keep out the monsters. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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What a lovely Minute poem. And you found the perfect picture to accompany it. It would be nice to have a jar of stars under the bed to keep out the monsters. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Hi Yvonne. Thanks so much!! I appreciate your great comments.
Melissa
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
Very nicely written Melissa! Such a wonderful picture to go with your poetic mastery. The simplicity of a child with a dream, let alone us yet such depth to reach the desires of one's heart.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Very nicely written Melissa! Such a wonderful picture to go with your poetic mastery. The simplicity of a child with a dream, let alone us yet such depth to reach the desires of one's heart.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Hello Kathleen. Thank you very much for your lovely comments. :)
Melissa
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You're welcome! I haven't been on FS for a long time so I'm making my come back today (at least to gain some member points in hopes of posting something one day soon) : )
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I am so glad to see your lovely face again, Kathleen!!
Melissa
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Thanks Melissa, I missed seeing your lovely face as well!