The Piper
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Comment from lyenochka
Well done with the two getting to know more about the other through this dialogue and it seems that Piper has quite impressed Master Crescendo!
" tuned to look at the High Mage. " (turned?)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Well done with the two getting to know more about the other through this dialogue and it seems that Piper has quite impressed Master Crescendo!
" tuned to look at the High Mage. " (turned?)
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the encouraging comments, and for catching the typo. I appreciate it!
Debi
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, enchantress that you are, I am most fortunate to have an opportunity to review this chapter, so I can continue to follow the adventures of your young hero in his adventures in meeting an ever expanding supply of characters and opinions about the nature of music and it's powers. Are you a musician as well?
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Dear Author, enchantress that you are, I am most fortunate to have an opportunity to review this chapter, so I can continue to follow the adventures of your young hero in his adventures in meeting an ever expanding supply of characters and opinions about the nature of music and it's powers. Are you a musician as well?
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you for such a nice review.
I do play a handful of instruments, but not the flute. That's the one I've always wanted to play. Someday I will. For now, I'll just hear Piper's tunes in my head.
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Dear Debbie, It is always good to have a goal. Let me know when you start your Flute lessons. My goal is to learn the stories behind the names Fan Story pick for this site? Would you be willing to tell me what ?w.j.? stands for?
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I turned my name backwards. Debi is my first name. My middle initial is J, and my last name starts with W (Walker). I liked w.j.debi because it was six letters and six syllables
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Question answered, Thanks !
Seems there is always a good reason.
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Wellmain reason is I was trying to find a pen name. There is already a published author under my real name.
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Ah the plot thickens!
Comment from dkblack
Another great chapter! Piper is very talented. So much so that everyone and everything around him stops whatever they are doing to listen to him. I'm looking forward to meeting the bees too! Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Another great chapter! Piper is very talented. So much so that everyone and everything around him stops whatever they are doing to listen to him. I'm looking forward to meeting the bees too! Well done!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the generous six star rating and the encouraging comments. I am happy to hear you are enjoying the story.
Debi
Comment from Bichon
Although I have not read the other parts yet, I really like that I can just dive in and get a good feel of the characters straight away! You have done a great job with the setting and the personalities!
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Although I have not read the other parts yet, I really like that I can just dive in and get a good feel of the characters straight away! You have done a great job with the setting and the personalities!
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging comments.
Debi