Through Her Eyes acrostic sonnet
Love poem contest entry20 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow! This is exquisite! So well written I'd give you a seventh star if I had one to give. Not only is it one of the best romantic love poems I have read, but it is done as an acrostic, and the rhyme scheme and choice of rhymes are very well done. The artwork shows her as enticing just as the poem suggests. The whole presentation is wonderful. The black background, with the swirling letters in a great shade of blue, is esthetically pleasing to look at, as well as lovely to read. The subject matter is well developed and alluring to ponder. Thank you for this charge on a Sunday morning.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Wow! This is exquisite! So well written I'd give you a seventh star if I had one to give. Not only is it one of the best romantic love poems I have read, but it is done as an acrostic, and the rhyme scheme and choice of rhymes are very well done. The artwork shows her as enticing just as the poem suggests. The whole presentation is wonderful. The black background, with the swirling letters in a great shade of blue, is esthetically pleasing to look at, as well as lovely to read. The subject matter is well developed and alluring to ponder. Thank you for this charge on a Sunday morning.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Again, another outstanding review, my friend. I can't even put into words how much I appreciate your kindness and overviews, Jesse. I'm honored for the fantastic review and giant sixer. Sorry for the late response. I'm remodeling a bathroom and the last few days have been hectic around here. Thank you again, Jesse. I'm glad you liked love poem offering. Have a great rest of your week.
Ron
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Hello Ron.
You're very welcome. It was a pleasure to read and review this piece. I am glad you liked my review. Enjoy the rest of your week, as well.
Take care, Jesse
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem. Seeing love and passion through her eyes can reveal everything anyone should know about the emotions she can no longer hide from the world.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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A very well-written acrostic poem. Seeing love and passion through her eyes can reveal everything anyone should know about the emotions she can no longer hide from the world.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review and gracious stars, Sandra. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
Comment from Pantygynt
A rather beautiful entry into the 'Love Poem' contest. This one should do well for a number of reasons. It is written in the old fashioned way Elizabethan sonnets used to be presented, as a single block rather than in three quatrains and couplet, which seems to be the vogue nowadays. The iambic pentameter is perfect throughout and the rhyme scheme follos that sonnet form's pattern
Amazingly enough it is additionally an acrostic of its title. Were it allowed here you could have entered it in any of three contests with a good chance of success in all.
I think this deserves the first of my new stack of sixes.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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A rather beautiful entry into the 'Love Poem' contest. This one should do well for a number of reasons. It is written in the old fashioned way Elizabethan sonnets used to be presented, as a single block rather than in three quatrains and couplet, which seems to be the vogue nowadays. The iambic pentameter is perfect throughout and the rhyme scheme follos that sonnet form's pattern
Amazingly enough it is additionally an acrostic of its title. Were it allowed here you could have entered it in any of three contests with a good chance of success in all.
I think this deserves the first of my new stack of sixes.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Hey, Pantygynt, hello. Thank you for the first of your big sixers, my friend. I'm honored. Sorry about the delayed response. I'm remodeling one of my bathrooms and the last few days have been busy, busy, busy. I really appreciate the fantastic review and six, Pantygynt. I love the sonnet form and always like to challenge myself with more than just meter. So I try adding the acrostic in there as well. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day and thank you again.
Ron
Comment from QC Poet
Very Creative Acrostic Love Poem. The "R" in responding through me off with a bit with the alignment of the rest, but this is excellent.Thank you for Sharing it. Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Very Creative Acrostic Love Poem. The "R" in responding through me off with a bit with the alignment of the rest, but this is excellent.Thank you for Sharing it. Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, GM. I appreciate you stopping by. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love the miracle of short-term happiness, but worse risking everything for it. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Love the miracle of short-term happiness, but worse risking everything for it. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Iza. I rally appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
Comment from LyndaS
This is breathtaking, sir. I love when passion like this comes from a man's point of view. "Yet still they hold their secrets to confess." What a powerful line. This entire presentation is exquisite and this acrostic sonnet is, I think, phenomenal . IT'S AN ACROSTIC SONNET!! Your talent and skill are clearly evident in this contest entry. This is simply beautiful and deserves the win. Also it's as romantic as anything I've seen written here. Hence, you aced the love poem challenge. Loved it! Lynda
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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This is breathtaking, sir. I love when passion like this comes from a man's point of view. "Yet still they hold their secrets to confess." What a powerful line. This entire presentation is exquisite and this acrostic sonnet is, I think, phenomenal . IT'S AN ACROSTIC SONNET!! Your talent and skill are clearly evident in this contest entry. This is simply beautiful and deserves the win. Also it's as romantic as anything I've seen written here. Hence, you aced the love poem challenge. Loved it! Lynda
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Wow, what a phenomenal review, Lynda. Thank you sooooo much for the kind words and the giant sixer. Sorry about the delayed response. House remodeling has had me busy for the last few days. I really appreciate the gracious stars, Lynda. Thank you again. I hope you have a wonderful day.
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Ron
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Comment from kahpot
If I had a six so would you though unsure about the sonnet form, "grows passion only they are meant to share" there are lines of love all through this work, your presentation is exceptional, but your words truly ENHANCE it, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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If I had a six so would you though unsure about the sonnet form, "grows passion only they are meant to share" there are lines of love all through this work, your presentation is exceptional, but your words truly ENHANCE it, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and the big six offer, my friend. Yeah, I love those sonnets. I just like to challenge myself more by making it an acrostic as well. I really appreciate the great review and stars, kahpot. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Aaron Rodenburg
I like this a lot. You have put in the time and it shows. Great acronym embedded in the poem... and you didn't twist it to fit, great job. No negative comments here. Bookcasing this one for sure. Good luck!!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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I like this a lot. You have put in the time and it shows. Great acronym embedded in the poem... and you didn't twist it to fit, great job. No negative comments here. Bookcasing this one for sure. Good luck!!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review and the huge sixer, Aaron. I like to challenge myself a bit more than just a regular sonnet. I appreciate that you noticed how much work went into this one and the good luck wishes, friend. Sorry about the delayed response. I have a house project going on and it's used up most of my time for the last few days. Thank you again for the giant six, Aaron. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Susan Larson
What talent! By merely reading this I fell in love all over again! So erotic are your words, in some ways explicit, in some ways enticing, in some ways erotic. I would love to see this one win.
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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What talent! By merely reading this I fell in love all over again! So erotic are your words, in some ways explicit, in some ways enticing, in some ways erotic. I would love to see this one win.
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Susan. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked my little offering. I hope you have wonderful rest of your weekend.
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Ron
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Love poem contest entry
Through Her Eyes acrostic sonnet
by DragonSkulls
Hello my friend
Beautiful acrostic sonnet in great form. The presentation is exquisite. Nice meter rhythm. Well done.
Gypsy ð???
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Love poem contest entry
Through Her Eyes acrostic sonnet
by DragonSkulls
Hello my friend
Beautiful acrostic sonnet in great form. The presentation is exquisite. Nice meter rhythm. Well done.
Gypsy ð???
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Hey, Gypsy, hello. Thank you for the fantastic review and gracious stars. I'm glad you liked my little offering. I love the new profile pic. It's pretty killer. Have a great rest of your weekend.
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Ron
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Thank you, Ron, you have a great weekend too. I love your profile pic too.