Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from crzypnter
Such a wonderful and inspiring poem. Especially in these times. I thought your last stanza sums it up well. We must put our faith in the lord not just in these tough times but for all time. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless
August
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Such a wonderful and inspiring poem. Especially in these times. I thought your last stanza sums it up well. We must put our faith in the lord not just in these tough times but for all time. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless
August
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Augusts, thank you! I delight that my poem resonated with you , please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from godlucifer
very thoughtful and kind of you to think of others. gods will is gods grace and together we will fight through these difficult times. hopefully all mankind will rise,rise to a pray of kindness. your poem was well express. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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very thoughtful and kind of you to think of others. gods will is gods grace and together we will fight through these difficult times. hopefully all mankind will rise,rise to a pray of kindness. your poem was well express. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Godlucifer: please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from Drew Delaney
This is a superb way to show gratitude for those on the front lines. Many of us must stay home during this crisis. In some situations it is not easy to do that. This calls to mind each one who is doing their part in this critical time. Nicely written.
Drew
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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This is a superb way to show gratitude for those on the front lines. Many of us must stay home during this crisis. In some situations it is not easy to do that. This calls to mind each one who is doing their part in this critical time. Nicely written.
Drew
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Drew, thank you! Please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Perfect poem for the times. The story told of all the important people helping out everyone out with the help of God. I like the last line and the image you chose for your piece. Thank you for sharing. Blessings. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Perfect poem for the times. The story told of all the important people helping out everyone out with the help of God. I like the last line and the image you chose for your piece. Thank you for sharing. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Brenda, your words of kindness do soothe in these difficult days. Thank you!
Comment from amada
Such a touching and full of sentiment poem for the Free Verse Poetry Club. This is the pirst poem I read about the support and devotion of our doctors, nurses, and caregivers. As an older adult in frail condition, I celebrate your words for these unsug heroes.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Such a touching and full of sentiment poem for the Free Verse Poetry Club. This is the pirst poem I read about the support and devotion of our doctors, nurses, and caregivers. As an older adult in frail condition, I celebrate your words for these unsug heroes.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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amada, I just turned seventy this week and have heart disease, so like you I am hunkered down and praying everyday for a cure! I delight that my poem resonated with you , please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
Such heartfelt sentiments can only be commended whilst shining a light on those selfless people giving without thought for themselves. It is at times like these that good shines out and banishes the darkness, thank you.
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Such heartfelt sentiments can only be commended whilst shining a light on those selfless people giving without thought for themselves. It is at times like these that good shines out and banishes the darkness, thank you.
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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I do thank you for your reflection, please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
I read to the bottom and I saw "look in the mirror". Sometimes I look into the mirror to see what others see and then I shave and comb my hair. I wish the mirror could see inside of hearts. Enjoyed your writing. Have a wonderful day...life!!!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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I read to the bottom and I saw "look in the mirror". Sometimes I look into the mirror to see what others see and then I shave and comb my hair. I wish the mirror could see inside of hearts. Enjoyed your writing. Have a wonderful day...life!!!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Kermit, thank you! Please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from nomi338
During times of stress and turmoil, the God who can command the elements to obey his wil, is watching our actions and our behavior. If we, though in possession of plenty, walk past our brother who is in need, what will that say about us? When all flesh is suffering, if we are only willing to help those who look like us, what will that say about us? We should never forget that troubling times are a perfect time for us to be defined as humane beings or careless, unloving, and cruel persons unworthy of being kept alive.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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During times of stress and turmoil, the God who can command the elements to obey his wil, is watching our actions and our behavior. If we, though in possession of plenty, walk past our brother who is in need, what will that say about us? When all flesh is suffering, if we are only willing to help those who look like us, what will that say about us? We should never forget that troubling times are a perfect time for us to be defined as humane beings or careless, unloving, and cruel persons unworthy of being kept alive.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Nomi, yes in every aspect of your wonderful and thoughtful reflection!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Your Halo
by JLR
Hello my friend
Beautiful free verse poem about having a Christian attitude in this difficult time. Take care of each other and pray. Good job.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Your Halo
by JLR
Hello my friend
Beautiful free verse poem about having a Christian attitude in this difficult time. Take care of each other and pray. Good job.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Gypsy, I delight with joy from your validating comments.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great focus in this poem to draw strength from God during these difficult times to pray and show kindness as much as possible. God is a faithful provider in all things and through all circumstances. Bill
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Great focus in this poem to draw strength from God during these difficult times to pray and show kindness as much as possible. God is a faithful provider in all things and through all circumstances. Bill
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Bill I appreciate your comments.