Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from harmony13
The author's words were descriptive, have a message and are
creative. At this difficult time the author's words mean so much.
I pondered on the theme of this poem. The artwork is great and compliments this poem well. Stay well and be safe...
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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The author's words were descriptive, have a message and are
creative. At this difficult time the author's words mean so much.
I pondered on the theme of this poem. The artwork is great and compliments this poem well. Stay well and be safe...
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Harmony, your kind words are soothing in these difficult times.
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Very clever poem to meet the requirements of the prompt entry. What will life be like after it all? We don't know but you expressed it well. Beautifully done. I love the image it has a very spiritual feel to it. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. Blessings. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Very clever poem to meet the requirements of the prompt entry. What will life be like after it all? We don't know but you expressed it well. Beautifully done. I love the image it has a very spiritual feel to it. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Brenda, thank you! I delight that my poem resonated with you , please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from amada
I read with much delight this poem of faith and enlight. And the artworl seems like a masterpiece of sunrise as well. I also like the line about living in our prescribed days in graceful manners. This is a great poem of faith and inspiration.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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I read with much delight this poem of faith and enlight. And the artworl seems like a masterpiece of sunrise as well. I also like the line about living in our prescribed days in graceful manners. This is a great poem of faith and inspiration.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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amada, thank you! I delight that my poem resonated with you , please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love your poem,I feel compassion, I feel hope given by our and only Saviour towards who we return every time we mess things up . Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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I love your poem,I feel compassion, I feel hope given by our and only Saviour towards who we return every time we mess things up . Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Iza, thank you! I delight that my poem resonated with you , please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
hahaha What an interesting poetic format! I will have to tag Jannypan to make sure she sees this one. So creative and fun -- but in this case, put together in a way to share an important message. Nice job. Good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
hahaha What an interesting poetic format! I will have to tag Jannypan to make sure she sees this one. So creative and fun -- but in this case, put together in a way to share an important message. Nice job. Good luck!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Robyn, thank you so much! I delight that my poem resonated with you , please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
I think you may have picked the hardest format imaginable but executed it with aplomb. I enjoyed it very much but even more so when I read what I should have noticed to begin with. On the second reading my gast was even more flabbered.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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I think you may have picked the hardest format imaginable but executed it with aplomb. I enjoyed it very much but even more so when I read what I should have noticed to begin with. On the second reading my gast was even more flabbered.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Smiling! Please take care,be well, be very well!
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I will and so must you.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
your words are so true
this is what I call a food for thought poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
your words are so true
this is what I call a food for thought poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Cookie, thank you! Please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from nomi338
Even though God did not create this current crisis, how we react and how we treat each other will no doubt be carefully observed. The second greatest commandment issued by God was for us to love our neighbor as we love ourselves. If we are unwilling to aid our brothers in their time of need, the message this sends out could determine our standing with God. Something to think about at this crucial time in our history.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Even though God did not create this current crisis, how we react and how we treat each other will no doubt be carefully observed. The second greatest commandment issued by God was for us to love our neighbor as we love ourselves. If we are unwilling to aid our brothers in their time of need, the message this sends out could determine our standing with God. Something to think about at this crucial time in our history.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Nomi, my friend, Please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Capture that Silver Lining
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the silver lining poem contest. I am not familiar with the trolaan poetic form. It looks and sounds good. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Capture that Silver Lining
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the silver lining poem contest. I am not familiar with the trolaan poetic form. It looks and sounds good. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Gypsy, thank you! Please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from Martie Zuckerman
I read with interest your comments on the type of poem you presented. Thank you for including the explanation. Are the "a" lines supposed to rhyme or just the "b" lines? I found the "a" line rhymes a bit of a stretch and one "b" line off as well. Perhaps I don't understand. The premise of the poem was enjoyable.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I read with interest your comments on the type of poem you presented. Thank you for including the explanation. Are the "a" lines supposed to rhyme or just the "b" lines? I found the "a" line rhymes a bit of a stretch and one "b" line off as well. Perhaps I don't understand. The premise of the poem was enjoyable.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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The rhyming pattern is a/b/a/b.