The Piper
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Comment from royowen
So Redd-Lief talks to Piper about his friend, wondering how much he can trust his friend with the knowledge of Piper being elemental, and Piper isn't sure himself yet . I've always enjoyed "science" fantasy and science fiction, because I was an escape artist, particularly when younger, and I haven't forgotten Debi. Oh and music. Being a musician. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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So Redd-Lief talks to Piper about his friend, wondering how much he can trust his friend with the knowledge of Piper being elemental, and Piper isn't sure himself yet . I've always enjoyed "science" fantasy and science fiction, because I was an escape artist, particularly when younger, and I haven't forgotten Debi. Oh and music. Being a musician. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Roy. I appreciate the excellent rating and your charming comments. Thank you for the encouragement.
Debi
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Well done
Comment from dkblack
Another well-written chapter! I am looking forward to seeing how the relationship between Piper and Redd-Leif pans out. A father and son relationship can go in so many directions!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Another well-written chapter! I am looking forward to seeing how the relationship between Piper and Redd-Leif pans out. A father and son relationship can go in so many directions!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic six star rating and the encouraging comments. You are so right about father and son relationships.
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Well deserved as always!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I am pleased that Piper and his father are on the same page now. Will Rupert be able to keep Piper's parentage a secret? I think so unless he gets excited and lets it slip at some point. They are the best of friends. Well done ,Debi> Stay in and be safe. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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I am pleased that Piper and his father are on the same page now. Will Rupert be able to keep Piper's parentage a secret? I think so unless he gets excited and lets it slip at some point. They are the best of friends. Well done ,Debi> Stay in and be safe. Nancy:)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Hi Nancy,
Thank you for continuing to follow the story and for the wonderful review. I am glad you like how Piper and his father are connecting.
Debi
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
First-class tale. W.J. Debi, I must remember reading all the previous chapters of this enchanting story. I am a great fan of faeries, but here I meet so many other species of this world of wonders, that I am really curious! Your style is engaging, the dialogs lively and the story as a whole believable.
I am hooked!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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First-class tale. W.J. Debi, I must remember reading all the previous chapters of this enchanting story. I am a great fan of faeries, but here I meet so many other species of this world of wonders, that I am really curious! Your style is engaging, the dialogs lively and the story as a whole believable.
I am hooked!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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The six stars are wonderful and the encouraging comments are wonderful, but that last sentence is what every author wants to hear! Thank you so much!
Debi
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Debi, so welcome!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aaaaah, so now I have more background... And really well-presented to someone that missed the much earlier installments - great job! Loved this one as it really brought out Redd-Leif's emotions where Piper's concerned with getting all 'explanatory'... :) ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady! ;) Yvette
High Mage," --> "High Mage,"
customer dictates that --> custom dictates that OR customs dictate that
mother you seemed to --> mother, you seemed to
comfortable enought to be --> comfortable enough to be
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Aaaaah, so now I have more background... And really well-presented to someone that missed the much earlier installments - great job! Loved this one as it really brought out Redd-Leif's emotions where Piper's concerned with getting all 'explanatory'... :) ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady! ;) Yvette
High Mage," --> "High Mage,"
customer dictates that --> custom dictates that OR customs dictate that
mother you seemed to --> mother, you seemed to
comfortable enought to be --> comfortable enough to be
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Hi Yvette,
I love your comments. I hadn't thought about catching up the reader, just in having Rupert and Piper catch up because they have been separated so long. I'm glad it works for the reader too.
Thanks for mentioning Redd-Leif's emotions. I was hoping to get that across.
I appreciate you catching the SPAG.
Comment from RShipp
"Redd-Leif waved toward the mushroom-shaped seats and they settled in." A great detail!
"Follow your heart, my boy. It will be the best judge." Great advice, even for mere humans.
As usual, I have enjoyed the read.
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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"Redd-Leif waved toward the mushroom-shaped seats and they settled in." A great detail!
"Follow your heart, my boy. It will be the best judge." Great advice, even for mere humans.
As usual, I have enjoyed the read.
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Hi RShipp,
Thank you for the excellent review and for pointing out what you liked. It helps to know what works. I am happy you enjoyed the story.
Debi
Comment from rspoet
Hello Debi,
Another wonderful addition to Piper's tale.
The awkwardness between Redd-Leif and Piper reads very well
and seems quite natural considering the circumstances.
I can't see the bond between Rupert and Piper being broken,
but I suspect Captain Burkehart might try to make use of it.
We called the steps in front of our house a "stoop."
I was pleased to see it in the first line, though others might not be familiar with the term. :)
Well done. I'm enjoying the story of Piper.
Robert
"He is human, an outsider. I know you've only been here a day, but as the elemental who knows him best our [customer] dictates custom
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Hello Debi,
Another wonderful addition to Piper's tale.
The awkwardness between Redd-Leif and Piper reads very well
and seems quite natural considering the circumstances.
I can't see the bond between Rupert and Piper being broken,
but I suspect Captain Burkehart might try to make use of it.
We called the steps in front of our house a "stoop."
I was pleased to see it in the first line, though others might not be familiar with the term. :)
Well done. I'm enjoying the story of Piper.
Robert
"He is human, an outsider. I know you've only been here a day, but as the elemental who knows him best our [customer] dictates custom
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Hi Robert,
Thank you so much for the wonderful review and the six stars!
I appreciate you mentioning the awkwardness between Piper and Redd-Leif. I was hoping that would come across. I love your thoughts on the story and am glad you are enjoying it.
Debi