Sensual Reminders
Because of you, they're everywhere21 total reviews
Comment from The Death
You've written an interesting poem. It's sensuous and captures love-making between two lovers quite well. Fine use of personification here. Good imagery as well. Nice presentation too. Good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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You've written an interesting poem. It's sensuous and captures love-making between two lovers quite well. Fine use of personification here. Good imagery as well. Nice presentation too. Good luck!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, The Death! 8-)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Sensual Reminders
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the 1 Line Only writing prompt contest. It's better than the last entry I read for this contest. It has great imagery
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Sensual Reminders
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the 1 Line Only writing prompt contest. It's better than the last entry I read for this contest. It has great imagery
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, Gypsy! 8-)
Comment from Susan Larson
This is beautiful I can just hear the words breezing, whispering, breathing as I read along. The picture illustrates the breeziness so beautifully. Is that really wallpaper?
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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This is beautiful I can just hear the words breezing, whispering, breathing as I read along. The picture illustrates the breeziness so beautifully. Is that really wallpaper?
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, Susan! 8-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written one-line poem saying everything that needs to be said to bring a picture I to the mind of the reader. An excellent art choice to complement your poem.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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A very well-written one-line poem saying everything that needs to be said to bring a picture I to the mind of the reader. An excellent art choice to complement your poem.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, Sandra! 8-)
Comment from aanneee
Very beautiful, picture and words. This is most deserving of a read and I am glad that I popped in to see it. So much said in so few words, gotta love it...me, I am a bit of a rambler and so admire those who say so much in so few words...Dinah
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Very beautiful, picture and words. This is most deserving of a read and I am glad that I popped in to see it. So much said in so few words, gotta love it...me, I am a bit of a rambler and so admire those who say so much in so few words...Dinah
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, Dinah! And feel free to drop by and ramble anytime... you might just find a fellow rambler here when time permits! 8-)
Comment from roof35
You have said a lot in one line and penned an excellent poem for the contest. Your illustration, of course, sets the stage for your words. This is very nicely done.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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You have said a lot in one line and penned an excellent poem for the contest. Your illustration, of course, sets the stage for your words. This is very nicely done.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, roof35! 8-)
Comment from bhogg
I've never tried a one line poem. To me, lots of imagery in yours, with so few words. You also found some very appropriate artwork to accompany your post. Good luck in your contest. Bill
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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I've never tried a one line poem. To me, lots of imagery in yours, with so few words. You also found some very appropriate artwork to accompany your post. Good luck in your contest. Bill
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, Bill! 8-)
Comment from January L'Angelle
I enjoyed this poem a lot. It is very sensual and sexy. I like the picture that you chose to go with your poem. It represents the beauty of the poem really well. This is very well written and very well thought out. -January L. :)
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed this poem a lot. It is very sensual and sexy. I like the picture that you chose to go with your poem. It represents the beauty of the poem really well. This is very well written and very well thought out. -January L. :)
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, January! 8-)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Sensual reminder expressed; warm breezes whisper the natural sensual blow across the breasts; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Sensual reminder expressed; warm breezes whisper the natural sensual blow across the breasts; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, Alcreator! 8-)
Comment from Pantygynt
I reckon the three initial 'Bs' here (breezes, breath and breasts) are physically close enough to be considered as a neat touch of alliteration in this sensuous single liner.
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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I reckon the three initial 'Bs' here (breezes, breath and breasts) are physically close enough to be considered as a neat touch of alliteration in this sensuous single liner.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, Pantygynt! 8-)