Mother with Child
A foal is born.18 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a sweet poem and well-written. I could see everything you mentioned, Aussie. The main point I take away form this is the love of the mother for her son and the love Jesus has for everything. Your picture is so perfect and adorable. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes and the imagery I stated.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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This is a sweet poem and well-written. I could see everything you mentioned, Aussie. The main point I take away form this is the love of the mother for her son and the love Jesus has for everything. Your picture is so perfect and adorable. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes and the imagery I stated.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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G'day Jan, Many thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Love, K.
Comment from Janetsue
I so wish I had a six for this...you know how crazy I am abouthorses--and the posting is so well written with a spiritual message entwined with the beautiful equine theme. I love it! xo
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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I so wish I had a six for this...you know how crazy I am abouthorses--and the posting is so well written with a spiritual message entwined with the beautiful equine theme. I love it! xo
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Never mind, the thought of a six was there. Yes, equine nut you are. Glad you enjoyed. Love, K.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
What a wonderful picture. We had this experience twice in the years we had horses. It is a wonderful thing to see and then to watch as the colt investigates everything that catches his eyes. No fillies for us, Colts each time, but we were very happy! Well done Kaye. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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What a wonderful picture. We had this experience twice in the years we had horses. It is a wonderful thing to see and then to watch as the colt investigates everything that catches his eyes. No fillies for us, Colts each time, but we were very happy! Well done Kaye. Nancy:)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Hello Nancy, Long time no see? Hope all is well. You never forget the birth of a foal. I don't blame you for no fillies! Nice to see you. Blessings, Kay. xx
Comment from aryr
This was beautiful, Kace. The last stanza truly said it all, didn't it? It is all about nature's love, a mother's love. You chose a wonderful picture that captured the moment, in fact one can see the love in the mare's face.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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This was beautiful, Kace. The last stanza truly said it all, didn't it? It is all about nature's love, a mother's love. You chose a wonderful picture that captured the moment, in fact one can see the love in the mare's face.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Hello my friend, and thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed. Love, K. xx
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You are so welcome Kace, it was beautiful.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
So beautiful! And so moving. A birth always is, as you so aptly describe:New birth, new life, forever dawn. You pictured it all so perfectly that I felt myself a witness, standing there, being part of the wonder. Thank you, Lord, for a new life.
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So beautiful! And so moving. A birth always is, as you so aptly describe:New birth, new life, forever dawn. You pictured it all so perfectly that I felt myself a witness, standing there, being part of the wonder. Thank you, Lord, for a new life.
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Hello Marjon, Many thanks for your kind comments. Glad you enjoyed. Love, K xx
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Comment from June Sargent
Such a beautiful and uplifting tribute to motherhood! In this time of pandemic and protests, it is refreshing to focus on the natural love of a mother and her young one. Despite the surrounding chaos caused by man, we can still have hope that the cycle of life will continue. Thank you for the reminder.
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Such a beautiful and uplifting tribute to motherhood! In this time of pandemic and protests, it is refreshing to focus on the natural love of a mother and her young one. Despite the surrounding chaos caused by man, we can still have hope that the cycle of life will continue. Thank you for the reminder.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Hi June, Yes, that was the message I tried to incorporate.Where there is life, there is hope. Have a good day. Love, K xx
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a wonderful poem (story). I hope that you got to witness this wonderful event. I've never seen a foal being born, but once I got to see one trying to stand for the first time. I'll never forget that moment. It made a tear in my eye, too.
I like how you tie the birth of the foal to all births. New life is a miracle. Nothing else in life can even compare. I love your last line, particularly your reference to forever dawn.
This is a nice poem. I am so glad that I read it on this dreary day.
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What a wonderful poem (story). I hope that you got to witness this wonderful event. I've never seen a foal being born, but once I got to see one trying to stand for the first time. I'll never forget that moment. It made a tear in my eye, too.
I like how you tie the birth of the foal to all births. New life is a miracle. Nothing else in life can even compare. I love your last line, particularly your reference to forever dawn.
This is a nice poem. I am so glad that I read it on this dreary day.
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Hi Debbie, Thanks for reading, hope it lifted your spirits. If we don't have hope, we have nothing. Mother Nature is a good teacher. Love, K xx
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written poem my friend about a mother horse with her new born foal. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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This is a very beautiful and well written poem my friend about a mother horse with her new born foal. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Hi Teri, Thanks for reading my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed. I tried to bring Jesus into the new life. Love, Kay xx