Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "He and She"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine scene described here of these bold birds brightening the forest green, how wonderful to see them in the trees, I would love to see them, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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A fine scene described here of these bold birds brightening the forest green, how wonderful to see them in the trees, I would love to see them, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thank you for reading and commenting on this writing challenge.
Comment from Sugarray77
I wish I had a six for this one, Jim. It is so very good. I am a birder and loved the words you chose to describe the cardinals colors, companionship and finally their migration... a perfect closing line. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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I wish I had a six for this one, Jim. It is so very good. I am a birder and loved the words you chose to describe the cardinals colors, companionship and finally their migration... a perfect closing line. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Melissa, smiling back with appreciation, see you tomorrow!
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
Beautiful commentary on the most beautiful birds in the garden. You captured their mannerisms, character and surroundings perfectly. Wonderful poem and complementary image... ...ec
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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Beautiful commentary on the most beautiful birds in the garden. You captured their mannerisms, character and surroundings perfectly. Wonderful poem and complementary image... ...ec
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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I do appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on this Picture this challenge. Have an awesome weekend.
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a very late but hearty 'you're welcome!'
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your challenge poem reads well. I like the scattered rhyme and the smooth flow. Your words create great imagery. I could see these two beautiful cardinals as I read. I enjoyed how they were at first with the green leaves then how they blended in with the changing colors.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Your challenge poem reads well. I like the scattered rhyme and the smooth flow. Your words create great imagery. I could see these two beautiful cardinals as I read. I enjoyed how they were at first with the green leaves then how they blended in with the changing colors.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thanks Jan,
Comment from amada
This is a great entry for the October Cardinals prompt.
This is very beautiful, the visual art as well as your descriptive lines. I feel like falling in love with these cardinals.
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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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This is a great entry for the October Cardinals prompt.
This is very beautiful, the visual art as well as your descriptive lines. I feel like falling in love with these cardinals.
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Amada, thank you, Fall is in the air for certain.
Comment from lyenochka
What a lovely poem for this picture challenge! When I read the "He and She," it made me realize that the picture is of a couple. Some birds are blessed with lifelong mates and your poem points that out very well.
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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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What a lovely poem for this picture challenge! When I read the "He and She," it made me realize that the picture is of a couple. Some birds are blessed with lifelong mates and your poem points that out very well.
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thank you, smiling back with JOY!