Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Light From Many Sources"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from joycetreasures
Hello JLR,
This is another elegant piece from you. Light comes from many sources especially from the sunrise. The art work is beautiful to reflect your poem's message. This was an enjoyable read. I concur what the human eye sees is an individual thing. Enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Hello JLR,
This is another elegant piece from you. Light comes from many sources especially from the sunrise. The art work is beautiful to reflect your poem's message. This was an enjoyable read. I concur what the human eye sees is an individual thing. Enjoyable read.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Joyce, you are so kind, I do hope that all is well in your life.
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You are welcome. Things are fine in my life.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello JLR this chapter in your book-- Muses of the Heart
Light From Many Sources that are excellent free verse; let me tell you my favorite part about the moon light glow--
that the nearby streetlight will suddenly extinguish its
warm projection of light seen within the fading shadows.
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Hello JLR this chapter in your book-- Muses of the Heart
Light From Many Sources that are excellent free verse; let me tell you my favorite part about the moon light glow--
that the nearby streetlight will suddenly extinguish its
warm projection of light seen within the fading shadows.
Gert
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Gert, I thank you so much for this validation on this free verse.
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
A lovely description of a sunrise! I particularly liked this line: "the very first purposeful projections of golden illumination gather speed rising with brilliant radiance..." You used a number of descriptive words that really add to the suspense of what will ultimately happen when the sun fully rises.
Well done!
Susan
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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A lovely description of a sunrise! I particularly liked this line: "the very first purposeful projections of golden illumination gather speed rising with brilliant radiance..." You used a number of descriptive words that really add to the suspense of what will ultimately happen when the sun fully rises.
Well done!
Susan
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Susan, thank you for picking out this personally favorite line buried within this free verse presentation.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think that free verse is the hardest style to write, and I always fail dismally. You have it perfect. I love the vivid imagery you have here, the.... sparkling dance of light, from a million stars across my pre-dawn sky....
Stunning words. I think you did the Fabulous Free Verser Club proud. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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I think that free verse is the hardest style to write, and I always fail dismally. You have it perfect. I love the vivid imagery you have here, the.... sparkling dance of light, from a million stars across my pre-dawn sky....
Stunning words. I think you did the Fabulous Free Verser Club proud. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Sandra, please accept my sincere thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my latest Free Verse Club entry.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
As I read your lovely poem I could visualize the golden sunrise time.I thoroughly enjoyed it. The rhyme and flow is charming. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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As I read your lovely poem I could visualize the golden sunrise time.I thoroughly enjoyed it. The rhyme and flow is charming. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Seshadri, Thank you very much! I am so appreciative of your time taken to read and comment on my work.
Comment from Therese Caron
Beautifully written poem! Some of your phrases are so original and so beautiful. Example: hiding that backdrop of starlight. Gorgeously said. In addition, your first line grabs attention and makes the reader want to keep reading. I see this Is a club entry for a writing club where you are a member. I hope you do well, as this is an excellent poem. In addition, the image is stunning.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Beautifully written poem! Some of your phrases are so original and so beautiful. Example: hiding that backdrop of starlight. Gorgeously said. In addition, your first line grabs attention and makes the reader want to keep reading. I see this Is a club entry for a writing club where you are a member. I hope you do well, as this is an excellent poem. In addition, the image is stunning.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Therese, thank you so very much! This is one among about fifty of my favorite poems this fiscal year. I am very glad that you found this one pleasing.
Comment from estory
I like the shimmering, scintillating effects you created in this piece, nice job with the alliterations stitched through the language to make that happen, and the images were colorful and sparkling to flesh out the scene of sunrise. You captured a moment in time, a moment of contemplation of the workings of nature. estory
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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I like the shimmering, scintillating effects you created in this piece, nice job with the alliterations stitched through the language to make that happen, and the images were colorful and sparkling to flesh out the scene of sunrise. You captured a moment in time, a moment of contemplation of the workings of nature. estory
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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estory, thank you so very much! This is one among about fifty of my favorite poems this fiscal year. I am very glad that you found this one pleasing.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about different sources of light but the natural light usually outsourced artificial light and we stand in awe when we see the awesome light of Life.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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A very well-written free verse poem about different sources of light but the natural light usually outsourced artificial light and we stand in awe when we see the awesome light of Life.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Sandra, thank you!
Comment from Gloria ....
You know, J, your forte is definitely free verse. Every line is filled with brilliance and with the occasional rhyme and metre you have met all the demands of a lovely poem.
I truly enjoyed this, and I hope you write more. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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You know, J, your forte is definitely free verse. Every line is filled with brilliance and with the occasional rhyme and metre you have met all the demands of a lovely poem.
I truly enjoyed this, and I hope you write more. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Gloria, I am very grateful for your validation on my free verse style.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Man From Many Sources", is an extremely well-written, and thought-provoking piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet's work, was
a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing, your next post.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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"Man From Many Sources", is an extremely well-written, and thought-provoking piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet's work, was
a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing, your next post.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Duchess, thank you!
JLR,
I hope I'm not stuttering, but your very welcome.
God bless, take care and stay safe!
the Duchess