Flicker
Lune Poetry Contest38 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry speaks of many things, zanya. There are the dark days of winter, the virus, the unrest/war in many places worldwide, and that of individuals within their hearts. However, you give readers something positive in that the light doesn't extinguish itself totally. Good job on the syllable count, the perfect image, and the color scheme.
Best wishes, Jan
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Your contest entry speaks of many things, zanya. There are the dark days of winter, the virus, the unrest/war in many places worldwide, and that of individuals within their hearts. However, you give readers something positive in that the light doesn't extinguish itself totally. Good job on the syllable count, the perfect image, and the color scheme.
Best wishes, Jan
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, zanya.
-You have written a good lune.
-Good syllable count and effective
imagery that shows the impact
of a "dark wintry day."
-Effective alliteration and
concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, zanya.
-You have written a good lune.
-Good syllable count and effective
imagery that shows the impact
of a "dark wintry day."
-Effective alliteration and
concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
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Great review zanya
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You are very welcome.
Comment from A. Willow Bends
I love this little lune. It connected with me as I light a prayer candle each and every morning and have done so for years! Some days it does indeed, in your words "fade to a flicker!" Very creative in a short format and great visual choice. Love it!
Wendy
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I love this little lune. It connected with me as I light a prayer candle each and every morning and have done so for years! Some days it does indeed, in your words "fade to a flicker!" Very creative in a short format and great visual choice. Love it!
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine melancholy lune Zanya and the flame brings the warmth on those wintery days and hope may be thin, but it with continue to flicker, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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A fine melancholy lune Zanya and the flame brings the warmth on those wintery days and hope may be thin, but it with continue to flicker, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
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Superb reveiw zanya
Comment from Jeffrey Mitchell
A candle flickering in the wind trying not to go out, just like our hope flickers from this world. Dark days are the roar of a lion, that echoes in the wind. Great poem, good luck in the contest.
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A candle flickering in the wind trying not to go out, just like our hope flickers from this world. Dark days are the roar of a lion, that echoes in the wind. Great poem, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lune about experiencing the darkness is not always the end of hope and light. We do sometimes experience darkness to appreciate the light more when we get that opportunity again.
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A very well-written Lune about experiencing the darkness is not always the end of hope and light. We do sometimes experience darkness to appreciate the light more when we get that opportunity again.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
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Superb reveiw zanya
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Flicker', is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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'Flicker', is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Ann Market
This poem rings true...when nights seem that dark, a candle's only flicker seems to shed little light. Well done, and beautifully written!
Good luck to you in the contest!
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This poem rings true...when nights seem that dark, a candle's only flicker seems to shed little light. Well done, and beautifully written!
Good luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from DonandVicki
Your poem makes me feel that this year is going out with a flicker and the loss of hope that the New Year will not be much better than the last. I'm sure it will be a few more months before we will see the light at the end of the tunnel.
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Your poem makes me feel that this year is going out with a flicker and the loss of hope that the New Year will not be much better than the last. I'm sure it will be a few more months before we will see the light at the end of the tunnel.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an excellent example of a Lune poem. Your words are well chosen and they fit the contest specifications. The picture is a good addition. Happy holidays to you and yours.
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This is an excellent example of a Lune poem. Your words are well chosen and they fit the contest specifications. The picture is a good addition. Happy holidays to you and yours.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
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Thanks for a superb reveiw zanya