Night Birds Sing
Possibilities for my personal growth32 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Sounds like a beautiful morning, with birds then sunrise, a very peaceful start to a new day filled with positivity, hopes and aspirations. I do hope that you will make rapid progress to get freed from the constraints of the wheelchair. Cheers to walking along the beach very soon! Lovely writing. Great post. A challenge to us all to be thankful, and to be aware of the beautiful things all around us each day.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Sounds like a beautiful morning, with birds then sunrise, a very peaceful start to a new day filled with positivity, hopes and aspirations. I do hope that you will make rapid progress to get freed from the constraints of the wheelchair. Cheers to walking along the beach very soon! Lovely writing. Great post. A challenge to us all to be thankful, and to be aware of the beautiful things all around us each day.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Hello Wendy. You write excellent reviews and, like your posts, they are very well written. I love your take on this...to the beginning of the new day along with possibilities for hopes and aspirations.
Thank you for your kind comments. It is my sincere intention to get out of this wheelchair and walk one day soon. I appreciate your encouragement to do this very much.
Have a great day, my friend,
Jesse
Comment from karenina
By all means I enjoy it! Never heard of "tule fog!" ( I am SO east coast)--- had to run off and ask Mr. Google about it! Sure enough, it's a California phenomenon! Somehow pairing the serenity of nature with the quiet but steely determination to make great strides in your own journey to physical well being lends a (Six star) poignancy that makes me smile...
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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By all means I enjoy it! Never heard of "tule fog!" ( I am SO east coast)--- had to run off and ask Mr. Google about it! Sure enough, it's a California phenomenon! Somehow pairing the serenity of nature with the quiet but steely determination to make great strides in your own journey to physical well being lends a (Six star) poignancy that makes me smile...
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Hi Karenina! I love the way you put words together to get at the essence of a piece.
I grew up with tule fog almost every morning and evening so, I am used to it.
I am glad you enjoyed my prose piece and found it poignant. Thank you for the six stars...from you especially, they mean so much!
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This prose piece is vividly descriptive, skillfully written, and inspirational. I like the way the birds take center stage--trilling out a wake-up call, then moving on to blend with the other varied sounds of the day.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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This prose piece is vividly descriptive, skillfully written, and inspirational. I like the way the birds take center stage--trilling out a wake-up call, then moving on to blend with the other varied sounds of the day.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you, Janice, for your kind words of encouragement. I love the way you describe the first part of this piece very much. You capture it quite well.
Have a wonderful day,
Jesse
Comment from Janet Foor
An inspiring and uplifting story Jesse. Your positive attitude comes through loud and clear. Your love of nature and your willingness to seek a better life is a powerful message to all.
Blessings my friend
Janet
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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An inspiring and uplifting story Jesse. Your positive attitude comes through loud and clear. Your love of nature and your willingness to seek a better life is a powerful message to all.
Blessings my friend
Janet
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much, Janet, for the encouraging review. Your synopsis of this prose piece is wonderfully accurate...you see the essence of the spirit I have embracing the new day and improving my health. Thank you for your kind words.
Have a great evening, my friend,
Jesse
Comment from AnnaLinda
Hi Jesse,
Beautifully uplifting prose here with abundant alliteration throughout along with a positive outlook.
So cool that you've purchased a walking stick before even moving to a walker. Our bodies are made to heal and heal more you shall. My prayers are with you and thanks for sharing.
Also interesting is your hearing becoming more keen. This reminds me of the song, Morning Has Broken by Cat Stevens...even though I discovered it was originally written by a female poet years ago. I forget which year.
Keep taking care of yourself and enjoying nature on your path to greater health.
AnnaLinda
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Hi Jesse,
Beautifully uplifting prose here with abundant alliteration throughout along with a positive outlook.
So cool that you've purchased a walking stick before even moving to a walker. Our bodies are made to heal and heal more you shall. My prayers are with you and thanks for sharing.
Also interesting is your hearing becoming more keen. This reminds me of the song, Morning Has Broken by Cat Stevens...even though I discovered it was originally written by a female poet years ago. I forget which year.
Keep taking care of yourself and enjoying nature on your path to greater health.
AnnaLinda
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Hello AnnaLinda.
Thank you for this wonderfully encouraging review. So far, you're the only one to notice and comment on the alliteration of the piece. I love what you said about healing and how I have encouraged my body to heal. I think that shows up in my hearing increasing while my eyesight decreases in functionality.
I appreciate your kind words and, I will take good care of myself as best as I can.
Have a good afternoon,
Jesse
Comment from Sharon Davis
A poignant and powerful story that recognizes the beautiful sounds of sunrise and the majesty of Nature.
Well composed and presented.
Nicely shared.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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A poignant and powerful story that recognizes the beautiful sounds of sunrise and the majesty of Nature.
Well composed and presented.
Nicely shared.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Yes, nature and the sunrise are truly amazing. Thank you, Sharon, for all of your kind comments. I really appreciate the excellent review and rating.
Have a nice day,
Jesse
Comment from damommy
I can see you are a fellow nature lover. I love hearing the first morning birds. I hope you are able to do all that you want to, and soon. I'll say a prayer for you.
Yvonne
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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I can see you are a fellow nature lover. I love hearing the first morning birds. I hope you are able to do all that you want to, and soon. I'll say a prayer for you.
Yvonne
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Thank you, Yvonne, for saying a prayer for me to do all that I can. I do love nature and have my friend/caregiver roll me in my wheelchair on nature paths near where I live. Thank you for your encouragement.
Have a great evening,
Jesse
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the image your chose
for your story, Jesse, and
appreciate your notes.
-I like how you begin with
the sounds of nature so
early in the morning.
-I like the use of "majesty of a
brand new day...for adventure and dreams fulfilled!"
-Thanks for sharing about your
situation, and I hope it won't be
long before you will be using
that walking stick and "putting
your toes in the sand."
-Very well done, my friend.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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-I like the image your chose
for your story, Jesse, and
appreciate your notes.
-I like how you begin with
the sounds of nature so
early in the morning.
-I like the use of "majesty of a
brand new day...for adventure and dreams fulfilled!"
-Thanks for sharing about your
situation, and I hope it won't be
long before you will be using
that walking stick and "putting
your toes in the sand."
-Very well done, my friend.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Hello Pam. I can always count on you to give me a significant detailed review, with many features, including choosing your favorite lines. Your insightful and encouraging comments are always welcome, as well as your kind words.
Have a pleasant evening,
Jesse
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You are very welcome, Jesse, and I appreciate your reply. You are doing a good job with the prose writing. Have a great day and upcoming week.
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Thank you for all your positive comments, and I hope you have a wonderful upcoming week as well!
Jesse
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You are welcome, Jesse, and thanks for the good wishes.
Comment from kahpot
What wonderfully uplifting read, this will give hope and future possibilities to many, sometimes it is what we have and not what we've lost or losing that gives us the strength to improve, very well written, a most enjoyable read****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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What wonderfully uplifting read, this will give hope and future possibilities to many, sometimes it is what we have and not what we've lost or losing that gives us the strength to improve, very well written, a most enjoyable read****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review! I love your philosophy of what we have versus what we don't have and how to make the most of the attributes we have, instead of dwelling, on the ones we don't. I appreciate your kind words, and I am happy you enjoyed this piece.
Thank you for the six-star rating!
Have a great day,
Jesse
Comment from Senyai
Hi Jesse,
This is so uplifting! I am so glad I read this... I too, listen to the birds and wildlife that come into my yard each day. Their different songs bring such joy and to watch them interplay with the squirrels is more than entertaining :-) With your indominable spirit, I am sure you will walk again soon so you can walk that nature trail again!
This is the first of your work that I have had the pleasure of reading and look forward to reading more.
All the best,
Senyai
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Hi Jesse,
This is so uplifting! I am so glad I read this... I too, listen to the birds and wildlife that come into my yard each day. Their different songs bring such joy and to watch them interplay with the squirrels is more than entertaining :-) With your indominable spirit, I am sure you will walk again soon so you can walk that nature trail again!
This is the first of your work that I have had the pleasure of reading and look forward to reading more.
All the best,
Senyai
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Hello Senyai.
It is a pleasure to meet you. I thank you for your encouraging and inspiring review. We both share a love of birds and nature and, that is a wonderful way to get to know each other. Thanks again for your inspiring encouragement.
Have a wonderful evening,
Jesse
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You too, Jesse