Secrets in the Wind
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Stir the pot and watch it flame. There's nothing meaner than a retaliating dame. Hide your kahuna's, hands in the air, show some curtesy or get the heck out of there. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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Stir the pot and watch it flame. There's nothing meaner than a retaliating dame. Hide your kahuna's, hands in the air, show some curtesy or get the heck out of there. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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Oh my...does one protest to loudly... this fair lady likes the game of tug of war... it's much more exhilarating than tag. yes, the pot is brewing in several locations and it might boil over soon.
Smiles to you! Carol
Comment from royowen
Perhaps Jack is the unknown father of faith. But there is someone not in the character line up, it's Cynthia, and now Jeremy/Garth has rocked up on the scene, and there's the odd firework going one with Allie and he. So the plot is getting a little thicker, well done Carol, , blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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Perhaps Jack is the unknown father of faith. But there is someone not in the character line up, it's Cynthia, and now Jeremy/Garth has rocked up on the scene, and there's the odd firework going one with Allie and he. So the plot is getting a little thicker, well done Carol, , blessings Roy
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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Oh and it will get much thicker.... I just can't review fast enough to get enough $$$ to post...
Hope you are having a nice day...Thanks for the review and the joining the guessing game... I'm not telling...just yet!
Smiles, Carol
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Hah hah