Secrets in the Wind
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Comment from lancellot
Well, I don't know the top speed of a Land Rover, but I am surprised it put any distance on the Mercedes. I guess have Miguel lose Hank extends the story some more. That Miguel didn't want to kill Annie after setting the church full of people on fire is a bit weird. He wouldn't kill a child but he would do everything else including kidnapping and murder. People are strange.
Good work.
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Well, I don't know the top speed of a Land Rover, but I am surprised it put any distance on the Mercedes. I guess have Miguel lose Hank extends the story some more. That Miguel didn't want to kill Annie after setting the church full of people on fire is a bit weird. He wouldn't kill a child but he would do everything else including kidnapping and murder. People are strange.
Good work.
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Actually, I researched it and the Land Rover would give the Mercedes a run for its money...but since Hank has the top of the line he was closing the gap. I thought it was weird too except I needed her out of there...so I blamed his mother...What Mama Wants, Mama gets. I may have to change it when I rewrite. Thanks! Carol