Secrets in the Wind
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, Carol, it was just precious! I wish I had a few sixes for this part. I loved how little Annie was so desperate for Miguel to come out with her, and how she wanted Sophie to have a cuddle with him. It was lovely, Carol, you did do it justice, my friend. I know it's been a hard time for you, but you've come through with this chapter. It was everything and more that I could possibly want his part to be. Now to get the twins to meet. Well done, my clever, talented friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xxxx
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Oh, Carol, it was just precious! I wish I had a few sixes for this part. I loved how little Annie was so desperate for Miguel to come out with her, and how she wanted Sophie to have a cuddle with him. It was lovely, Carol, you did do it justice, my friend. I know it's been a hard time for you, but you've come through with this chapter. It was everything and more that I could possibly want his part to be. Now to get the twins to meet. Well done, my clever, talented friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xxxx
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Sandra... Another friend messaged to tell me she loved it but she was waiting till Sunday for her sixes. I was so afraid my pain would smother the connection I wanted Annie to make with Miguel. I wanted her to draw good into a very sad and desperate situation. Her innocence clouded the evil for a moment.
Hugs...Love, Carol