Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I don't like Pat, he's trouble, and I hate racists, and he's one! Ali needs to stay well clear of him. And she'd better go after Cord at the auction, I don't want her any where near that other creep.
I think Ali will get on well with Jewel, that horse seems to like her. Another good chapter in this book, Barbara. I'm enjoying this story. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I don't like Pat, he's trouble, and I hate racists, and he's one! Ali needs to stay well clear of him. And she'd better go after Cord at the auction, I don't want her any where near that other creep.
I think Ali will get on well with Jewel, that horse seems to like her. Another good chapter in this book, Barbara. I'm enjoying this story. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Wow I enjoyed reading this well written piece! Excellent story indeed my friend;-) The characters are exemplary and the storyline was captivating and held my attention throughout the piece!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you;-)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Wow I enjoyed reading this well written piece! Excellent story indeed my friend;-) The characters are exemplary and the storyline was captivating and held my attention throughout the piece!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you;-)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Comment from Begin Again
Your mom's internet may be a lot like mine, but it was the only one available when I moved here. I believe I've heard that U.S. Cellular has one in this location and my phone works perfectly so I might check with them.
Now, as for the story, I believe this is my favorite one. I know the football one is warm between Katherine and Gabriel and I enjoy the story line, but this one just seems to have something special woven between the lines. I can't explain it, but I love it. Maybe it is all the animals (especially the dogs) and don't forget the horses-a$$. LOl Nice job, Barbara.
Enjoy your visit with your family.
Hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Your mom's internet may be a lot like mine, but it was the only one available when I moved here. I believe I've heard that U.S. Cellular has one in this location and my phone works perfectly so I might check with them.
Now, as for the story, I believe this is my favorite one. I know the football one is warm between Katherine and Gabriel and I enjoy the story line, but this one just seems to have something special woven between the lines. I can't explain it, but I love it. Maybe it is all the animals (especially the dogs) and don't forget the horses-a$$. LOl Nice job, Barbara.
Enjoy your visit with your family.
Hugs, Carol
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement. All my reviewers seem to have a favorite story.
Comment from Ricky1024
This Chapter Number Five was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
I also notice as I was reviewing this. I could not find any problems with the grammar North Flo.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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This Chapter Number Five was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
I also notice as I was reviewing this. I could not find any problems with the grammar North Flo.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, it was good to see that you were able to post after all. Things are really moving along, and I can't wait to see how it will all pan out. Still away to go before we'll?find out. I love the story. Ulla:)))
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Hi Barbara, it was good to see that you were able to post after all. Things are really moving along, and I can't wait to see how it will all pan out. Still away to go before we'll?find out. I love the story. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Oh, oh, this story is shaping up to become very interesting - rivalry for the girl. I was surprised to see your story today, but am glad you were able to get internet at your mother's. Enjoy your visit.
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Oh, oh, this story is shaping up to become very interesting - rivalry for the girl. I was surprised to see your story today, but am glad you were able to get internet at your mother's. Enjoy your visit.
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome, Barbara