Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Ulla
Well, this was another well written chapter for the story. That Pat is beyond repair. He's horrible. Good on Ali to show him the cards. I can't wait to be reading on Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Well, this was another well written chapter for the story. That Pat is beyond repair. He's horrible. Good on Ali to show him the cards. I can't wait to be reading on Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Pat is horrible.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done on this chapter. Looks like Ali is more than a "Quiet Lawyer" and really knows what she is doing. I am sure a lot of women in the town will be singing her praises.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Well done on this chapter. Looks like Ali is more than a "Quiet Lawyer" and really knows what she is doing. I am sure a lot of women in the town will be singing her praises.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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They will. I can promise more will come. Thank you for the kind review. Ali is only quiet when it comes to personal relationships.
Comment from Ben Colder
What is Mexican street corn? You made me hungry for tonight's supper. I see how you are. Interesting story. I see nothing wrong with it. As usual, you keep the reader's attention. Good one, Barb.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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What is Mexican street corn? You made me hungry for tonight's supper. I see how you are. Interesting story. I see nothing wrong with it. As usual, you keep the reader's attention. Good one, Barb.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. Mexican street corn is salty, sweet, crunchy, and creamy in every bite. It hits all the right flavor notes, especially hot off the grill in the summer months when fresh corn is at its peak and abundantly available at every market. It's a popular street food in Mexico and can be served as a snack or side dish.
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Wee doggie ! Learn something every day.
Comment from amahra
Wow, this chapter was a "Me Too" moment. LOL Sounds like Pat is headed for a cell next to Weinstein. (and I don't think I spell that name correctly)
Great stuff, Barbara.
Um, Mexican street corn and Tres Leches cupcakes. Sounds tasty...did you make these up?
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Wow, this chapter was a "Me Too" moment. LOL Sounds like Pat is headed for a cell next to Weinstein. (and I don't think I spell that name correctly)
Great stuff, Barbara.
Um, Mexican street corn and Tres Leches cupcakes. Sounds tasty...did you make these up?
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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No, I didn't make them up. They are real Mexican food and taste great. I've eaten both numerous times. Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from BethShelby
I really enjoying your story. I like that Alexander is seeing that Pat is getting what he deserves. She very bold for a quiet lawyer. I've lived in county town and cities too so you are correct about small town people being willing to share. You made we want to try some of the Mexican street corn.
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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I really enjoying your story. I like that Alexander is seeing that Pat is getting what he deserves. She very bold for a quiet lawyer. I've lived in county town and cities too so you are correct about small town people being willing to share. You made we want to try some of the Mexican street corn.
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Thank you for understanding. I know one reviewer who's going to swear it wouldn't happen. LOL The reason for the notes.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Bravo!!! I loved this chapter!! Wait till Cordero hears about this. I'm thinking Ali should start up her own practice there is that town, it's obvious they need her there. This was a really well written story, and very well played out. I'm smiling big time at Ali's part in bringing this slime ball down. Well done, Barbara. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Bravo!!! I loved this chapter!! Wait till Cordero hears about this. I'm thinking Ali should start up her own practice there is that town, it's obvious they need her there. This was a really well written story, and very well played out. I'm smiling big time at Ali's part in bringing this slime ball down. Well done, Barbara. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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I think you just discovers maybe a little hope Ali will remain in town. Hmm, I wonder. Thank you for the kind review.