The Incomparable Fanny Barnwarmer
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Poor Robert. He is so tied up in knots of not understanding (just like us), and is impatient (very well-shown) as time is running out. Unfortunately his impatience just slows things down (making us impatient in turn (what a Gordian knot). Kate xx
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Poor Robert. He is so tied up in knots of not understanding (just like us), and is impatient (very well-shown) as time is running out. Unfortunately his impatience just slows things down (making us impatient in turn (what a Gordian knot). Kate xx
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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A Gordian knot! Ah-ha! I love it. Yeah, Robert does tend to slow the pace down, but he keeps Fanny on her toes. Thank you, my dear!
Jay
Comment from Theodore McDowell
You weaved in and out of possibilities as to the killer nicely in this one using your skill with the unique dialogue. You left us with another cliffhanger as to who disclosed the intent to kill the man. Well done weaving twists into the plot,
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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You weaved in and out of possibilities as to the killer nicely in this one using your skill with the unique dialogue. You left us with another cliffhanger as to who disclosed the intent to kill the man. Well done weaving twists into the plot,
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Love that you're reading this, Tim. I just hope I'm not weaving so tight a tapestry that it ends up suffocating the reader (playgoer).