Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from royowen
Don't you just love mums and their boys, all my grandsons are Nannie's boys, they are all favourites with her. Just love this episode, I like the way you've written those very special moments with the closeness of family, and now with Alie on he scene, near family. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Don't you just love mums and their boys, all my grandsons are Nannie's boys, they are all favourites with her. Just love this episode, I like the way you've written those very special moments with the closeness of family, and now with Alie on he scene, near family. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. I happen to believe family is everything.
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It certainly is important, particularly in harmony, that extends into a functional country.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Another well-done chapter. I think the Font is fine and see no errors in your work. I like the way you move the story along with conversation rather than just long paragraphs of information. So glad you found this picture of the cowboy in a tux. You sure keep us in suspense from week to week and that makes it interesting.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Another well-done chapter. I think the Font is fine and see no errors in your work. I like the way you move the story along with conversation rather than just long paragraphs of information. So glad you found this picture of the cowboy in a tux. You sure keep us in suspense from week to week and that makes it interesting.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
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You are welcome, Barbara
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very nice work.
I commiserate with you on FanStory's editor, and advanced editor. It changes my line spacing indiscriminately.
Grrrrrrr.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Very nice work.
I commiserate with you on FanStory's editor, and advanced editor. It changes my line spacing indiscriminately.
Grrrrrrr.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Another great reading chapter. I'm glad Cord is going to New York to be with Alex. Will Alex break down and tell Cord the truth about her past relationship with Alan Griffin? By the way, my son's name is Allan Griffin! You did a great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Another great reading chapter. I'm glad Cord is going to New York to be with Alex. Will Alex break down and tell Cord the truth about her past relationship with Alan Griffin? By the way, my son's name is Allan Griffin! You did a great job. Shirley
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Ali does not tell Cord the truth about Allan, but he does discover the truth himself, in later chapters. I hope your son doesn't mind being the bad guy here. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I saw a new aspect of Cordero here. Grumpy and intransigent. It was good, as it made him seem more human, with flaws. Looking forwards to more. Kate xx
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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I saw a new aspect of Cordero here. Grumpy and intransigent. It was good, as it made him seem more human, with flaws. Looking forwards to more. Kate xx
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Yes, Cordero does have flaws and we see them every so often. He can be very bossy and curt sometimes. Maybe before you started reading. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
I guess Cord has mixed feeling about going to New York. He doesn't like cities and probably hates wearing a tux or going to that kind of party. He is worried about the mare, but he wants to be there in case Ali needs him. I'm anxious to see how things go. I have a feeling Ali will need him.
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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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I guess Cord has mixed feeling about going to New York. He doesn't like cities and probably hates wearing a tux or going to that kind of party. He is worried about the mare, but he wants to be there in case Ali needs him. I'm anxious to see how things go. I have a feeling Ali will need him.
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. Cord does not want to go but will for Ali. I am guessing Ali will need him.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I had to chuckle over the 'goodnight' pics, lol. I'm so pleased Cord is going, I know Ali will be so pleased. They are in love and though neither has told the other, it's bound to happen soon. He'll need more measurements taken then, unless of course he wears the tux that's being made for him now. I'm really looking forward to the party. I'm thinking that will be quite an eventful chapter. Well done again! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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I had to chuckle over the 'goodnight' pics, lol. I'm so pleased Cord is going, I know Ali will be so pleased. They are in love and though neither has told the other, it's bound to happen soon. He'll need more measurements taken then, unless of course he wears the tux that's being made for him now. I'm really looking forward to the party. I'm thinking that will be quite an eventful chapter. Well done again! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Yes, there's a lot going to happen in the next chapter. I have to tell in it three parts. LOL Thank you for the kind review. I just finished reading your post. I am not happy about the way you left us in suspense. LOL
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LOL!! And I won't be too happy if the exciting bits in the next chapter Lol. are in the third part!!!
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LOL
Comment from prettybluebirds
Thanks for the footnotes and the tips about the advanced editor. Sometimes I get frustrated with the darn thing too. I love this story, and your writing makes it easy for me to envision the different scenes as a reader. I will watch for the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Thanks for the footnotes and the tips about the advanced editor. Sometimes I get frustrated with the darn thing too. I love this story, and your writing makes it easy for me to envision the different scenes as a reader. I will watch for the next chapter.
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.