Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 74 "To Err or not to err ..."Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Sally Law
Outstanding poetry here in a subject I am familiar with. Judgment comes more easily until we come into God's presence and learn of Him. I appreciate your kind words of peace, grace, and love.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sal :)) XOs
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Outstanding poetry here in a subject I am familiar with. Judgment comes more easily until we come into God's presence and learn of Him. I appreciate your kind words of peace, grace, and love.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sal :)) XOs
Comment Written 25-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Sal, I am overwhelmed by your six stars! I am humbled by your kindness and affirmation, thank you!
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You are most welcome and deserving. Be blessed
Sal :))
Comment from Fleedleflump
I enjoyed your sonnet about judgement and how subjectivity abounds within all of us. There is a solid sense of rhythm to this and the structure all fits the mould. Nicely done.
Mike
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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I enjoyed your sonnet about judgement and how subjectivity abounds within all of us. There is a solid sense of rhythm to this and the structure all fits the mould. Nicely done.
Mike
Comment Written 25-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Mike, thank you for affirming my effort.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Are your sonnets Italian, French or by god, English? I feel what's written to be Shakespearian, save for one word, oppugned. Why my friend, would that be spun into such a sonnet. perhaps, it was used five-hundred years ago, but I have never seen nor heard it echoed. Well done, bard.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Are your sonnets Italian, French or by god, English? I feel what's written to be Shakespearian, save for one word, oppugned. Why my friend, would that be spun into such a sonnet. perhaps, it was used five-hundred years ago, but I have never seen nor heard it echoed. Well done, bard.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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The bard smiles with great shame at my poetic license, :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Notes are appreciated.
-A good sonnet with a good topic.
-You present the problem very well in verse one.
-Effective use of questions in verses one and two,
followed by the observation about an uproar being uncouth.
-A good volta showing that "Divine recourse" is best.
-A good closing couplet.
-I am enjoying your sonnets!
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Notes are appreciated.
-A good sonnet with a good topic.
-You present the problem very well in verse one.
-Effective use of questions in verses one and two,
followed by the observation about an uproar being uncouth.
-A good volta showing that "Divine recourse" is best.
-A good closing couplet.
-I am enjoying your sonnets!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Pam, I do appreciate your kind remarks.
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You are very welcome, Jim.