Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was amazing! I'm so glad Cord went and even happier that he sorted Alan out. But ... has he gone forever? Or is he going to cause more trouble? Hmm. I won't mind if Cord is always there to sort him out. Ali must give up her life in the city, and go and live with ... marry, Cord and live at the ranch where she is happy. I love this, Barbara! Well done, my friend. :))Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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That was amazing! I'm so glad Cord went and even happier that he sorted Alan out. But ... has he gone forever? Or is he going to cause more trouble? Hmm. I won't mind if Cord is always there to sort him out. Ali must give up her life in the city, and go and live with ... marry, Cord and live at the ranch where she is happy. I love this, Barbara! Well done, my friend. :))Sandra xxx
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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I can promise we have not heard the end of Alan. We will see him at least four more times, if my memory serves me correctly. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
This chapter was near perfect. The only thing missing? Cord should have punched Alan in his pompous face. and then added a boot in his butt for good measure. Clearly, I cannot stand guys like Alan.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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This chapter was near perfect. The only thing missing? Cord should have punched Alan in his pompous face. and then added a boot in his butt for good measure. Clearly, I cannot stand guys like Alan.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Cord has another couple of chances. I wonder what will happen. Thank you for the kind review.
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My pleasure.
Comment from amahra
Another fine installment, Barbara.
"If you're wrong, it's going to be [a] long night and possibly permanently damage my relationship with Ali."
"I'm not surprise me." [Do you mean, "I'm not [,] surprise me."] Without I the comma, it puzzled me.
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Another fine installment, Barbara.
"If you're wrong, it's going to be [a] long night and possibly permanently damage my relationship with Ali."
"I'm not surprise me." [Do you mean, "I'm not [,] surprise me."] Without I the comma, it puzzled me.
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the catches. I appreciate the help. I've made the corrections.