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Winter Sprinkles

A poem

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Comment from Jesse James Doty
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This is an excellent way to use the fifteen-syllable poem. I love the beautiful picture and the use of sparkles around the letters in the lovely poem. I love the use of the words frosted freckles! This is a good candidate for the contest. Good luck!
Jesse


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 Comment Written 01-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much Jesse... I am feeling whimsical today :)

    Melissa
reply by Jesse James Doty on 01-Jan-2023
    You are welcome and good luck!
    Jesse
Comment from JT traveller
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Frosted freckles, good alliteration. I like it. I personally prefer a sunshine filled Christmas. Each to their own. Happy and prosperous new year to you.

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 Comment Written 01-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
    Thank you.