Comment from eliz100

Excellent

This is another excellent chapter. I was at the end before I knew it. Looks like trouble is brewing for Ali again. There is no need for corrections. I look forward to the next chapter.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023

Thank you for sharing this kind review.

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Good work, again. Drama to seal it all off for this chapter. Sorry, no SIXES this time. Take it as a virtual SIX though, as always. I was waiting for that creep to come in.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023

I sure will. Virtual sixes are just as good, to me. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Both Alan Griffin and Pat Rogers are not very nice, they deserve to be in a place that anti social people deserve to be. All of a sudden Alexandra is discussing what type of a wedding she would prefer and honeymoon she'd like and I think she might actually get one. Beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023

Thank you for the kind review and support.

reply by royowen on 20-Jan-2023

Bless you

Comment from Jim Wile

Excellent

I enjoyed this chapter, Barbara, especially the teasing banter among the women at lunch. I'm sure Ali liked it too despite all the blushing. You're building the suspense nicely surrounding Rogers. Personally, I prefer your longer chapters--more to enjoy!

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After Bart, declared Alexandra almost healed -- no comma after Bart

Pink-tinged Alexandra's cheeks -- no dash after Pink

Oh yea, St. Patrick's -- should be yeah (Yea means yes too, but it's reserved primarily for formal votes.)

"Would you want big reception then?" -- a big reception

"Ladies, have nice rest of your lunch." -- a nice rest of your lunch

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023

I HATE those little words. I read right over it as if they're there. LOL For pink tinged, I didn't have the dash there, but grammar check told me I needed it, so I put it in at the last second. It's now gone. I really do appreciate the help. Thank you. I can promise the second part to this chapter will be longer. All of chapter 27 at once would have been really long, so I broke it up.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

I'd almost forgotten about Rogers, but he's still around to stir up trouble. Will he arouse Ali's suspicions about Cord actually being the father of Amy's baby? Fun conversation with the girls about Ali and Cord's relationship and possible marriage. Ali has interesting about her wedding and honeymoon, wanting to keep things simple. I'm sure Cord will agree to that. Ali did a good job of handling Rogers, but it was still good to have the sheriff step in. Great chapter, and I'm sorry I have no sixes left for this excellent chapter. "Don't worry we won't listen to your conversation." I think you need some punctuation after worry. judi

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023

I will check it out. Thank you for the kind review and your continued support.

reply by judiverse on 21-Jan-2023

You're very welcome. It's interesting that Ali seems to do much better handling the other women's problems than she does with her own. She's getting there, though, now that she's free of Alan. judi

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023

Ali will get there. I promise you.

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

Poor Ali! She's constantly finding trouble wherever she is. Rogers is a creep, and I'm so glad Ali handled that without Cord! I was cheering for her, lol. I would guess his little visit to the ladies isn't going to set well in court, though. Great chapter! Best, JohnC

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023

Thank you for the support.

Comment from amahra

Exceptional

OMG! That was a great shocker scene. All of that typical girl talk about a wedding interrupted by Mr. Butt-brain calling them all whores. Fabulous, Barbara.

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023

Thank you for the kind review.

reply by amahra on 20-Jan-2023

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I have to keep up with your story, I know it's nearing its end. I liked the way this chapter went, a bit of girlie talk, and then down to it. That slimeball will be in for such a shock soon, I can't wait to read how you handle that. Well done, my friend. Excellent chapter. Sandra xx

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023

Thank you for the support. I appreciate you so much. Sending love and prayers. A few hugs too. LOL

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Wonderful chapter except for the baboon interrupting the wedding planning. Your girl is way too nice. I would have shown him to the door. Good thing the Sheriff was handy. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs



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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023

Thank you for the kind review. Ali is too nice. That's part of her flaws.