Guided by Faith
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Comment from jmdg1954
Barbara.
Your chapter flowed smoothly and was well written on a friendship or possible romance between Seth and Emma. Your last chapter ended with a proper dose of intrigue leaving the reader questioning what may or may not be involved.
I gotta get Tom to see why you are not coming up on my message board!
Good post. John
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Barbara.
Your chapter flowed smoothly and was well written on a friendship or possible romance between Seth and Emma. Your last chapter ended with a proper dose of intrigue leaving the reader questioning what may or may not be involved.
I gotta get Tom to see why you are not coming up on my message board!
Good post. John
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Let me know what Tom says.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your story does sound like something is going to happen to the new girl in town. Emma is always having problems with her dog running out at night and getting into mischief.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Your story does sound like something is going to happen to the new girl in town. Emma is always having problems with her dog running out at night and getting into mischief.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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We'll get that dog issue settled. LOL Thank you for the kind reveiw.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is very good. You also ended on a good cliffhanger. Now I have to wait to see that the car was doing there. I hope we find out soon why the sheriff keeps shaking his head. It has negative connotations. It's also a very interesting, odd habit.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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This is very good. You also ended on a good cliffhanger. Now I have to wait to see that the car was doing there. I hope we find out soon why the sheriff keeps shaking his head. It has negative connotations. It's also a very interesting, odd habit.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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It does have negative connotations. We'll get to the bottom of it eventually. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
I'm enjoying the story. Seth sounds very concerned about the neighborhood safety. Is there a reason to think some may happen and she needs to nervous about going out with dog at night. I'll be waiting to read more. Fixin' is southern, not just Texas. I've heard it all my life.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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I'm enjoying the story. Seth sounds very concerned about the neighborhood safety. Is there a reason to think some may happen and she needs to nervous about going out with dog at night. I'll be waiting to read more. Fixin' is southern, not just Texas. I've heard it all my life.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. All will make sense, eventually.
Comment from Sankey
Still a top writer in my estimation. A lovely continuance to your lovely new book. I have gotten (terrible American word for "become") used to your style and your "hallmarks" are all over your books exclusive to you. One of my wife's favourite hymns is "Victory In Jesus!" Mine too. I hope someone out there grabs on to some of your stuff for a mini-series or movie. Just ONE spag today! at my parent[']s(')." I hope Roy Owens reads your stuff.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Still a top writer in my estimation. A lovely continuance to your lovely new book. I have gotten (terrible American word for "become") used to your style and your "hallmarks" are all over your books exclusive to you. One of my wife's favourite hymns is "Victory In Jesus!" Mine too. I hope someone out there grabs on to some of your stuff for a mini-series or movie. Just ONE spag today! at my parent[']s(')." I hope Roy Owens reads your stuff.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Roy does read me every week. Made the correction. Thank you for the catch. I appreciate the help and the kind review.
Comment from royowen
A little different from your past stories, in as much as the early scenes were set in church with Emma, urged by her godfather and Pastor Pat, she had to sing an impromptu number, while she was unprepared, a dislike that, I could do it, bu I don't like it. Later She gets to know her young man, well done Barbara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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A little different from your past stories, in as much as the early scenes were set in church with Emma, urged by her godfather and Pastor Pat, she had to sing an impromptu number, while she was unprepared, a dislike that, I could do it, bu I don't like it. Later She gets to know her young man, well done Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, this one is a little different. I hope it goes well.
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Of course, I have confidence in you.
Comment from Ben Colder
I found this writing brought memories of my old days in the ministry. It was always good when having people of talent entertain us with a song near their hearts. Good one, Barb.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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I found this writing brought memories of my old days in the ministry. It was always good when having people of talent entertain us with a song near their hearts. Good one, Barb.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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I'm glad it brought back old memories. Since being a military spouse for 23 years, we've had many church homes. I've found that the smaller churches brought more fellowship. Maybe it was just me.
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No, smaller churches seem to have more freedom than larger churches, but it is where the Holy Spirit dwells, both large and small that counts.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Aren't you in Arkansas? I always think of it as being in the south. We use fixin all the time here in Oklahoma. I'm always fixin to do something or another. You did a great job as usual. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Enjoy your Sunday afternoon. Shirley
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Aren't you in Arkansas? I always think of it as being in the south. We use fixin all the time here in Oklahoma. I'm always fixin to do something or another. You did a great job as usual. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Enjoy your Sunday afternoon. Shirley
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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I'm in Texas. Thank you for the kind review.
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For some reason, I have always thought you were in Arkansas. What part of Texas do you live in?
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Right outside the Fort Hood area, Hill Country.
Comment from judiverse
Your chapter ending left me intrigued. Seth sees headlights of a car and wonders what it's doing there. Is Emma going to have some kind of problem coming up? Maybe with a stalker? I like the friendly atmosphere with the church and the pastor coming to dinner. I remember that our pastor sometimes came to dinner when I was a child. Sounds like a delicious dinner, too. Emma seems at ease with Seth, as she's invited him to join her for a meal of leftovers. It's fun to picture Ace "herding" Molly. Great beginnings for your new novel. judi
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Your chapter ending left me intrigued. Seth sees headlights of a car and wonders what it's doing there. Is Emma going to have some kind of problem coming up? Maybe with a stalker? I like the friendly atmosphere with the church and the pastor coming to dinner. I remember that our pastor sometimes came to dinner when I was a child. Sounds like a delicious dinner, too. Emma seems at ease with Seth, as she's invited him to join her for a meal of leftovers. It's fun to picture Ace "herding" Molly. Great beginnings for your new novel. judi
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the encouragment.
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You're welcome. I love what you're doing so far. judi
Comment from damommy
It wasn't too long at all. You've left me handing, wondering who's coming up the road. I smell a mystery and a romance in the air. I love Ace! I can hardly wait to read more.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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It wasn't too long at all. You've left me handing, wondering who's coming up the road. I smell a mystery and a romance in the air. I love Ace! I can hardly wait to read more.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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There is a mystery with this romance. LOL Thank you for the kind review.