The Potters Wheel
A loop poem22 total reviews
Comment from Julie Lau
I was pleased to find this poem, with its unusual subject, as I have recently started working with clay myself, although the only ones to benefit from my lumpy little efforts to date have been the budgerigars next door. Well done with the looping.
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reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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I was pleased to find this poem, with its unusual subject, as I have recently started working with clay myself, although the only ones to benefit from my lumpy little efforts to date have been the budgerigars next door. Well done with the looping.
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Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Julie, thank you. I have just made it to my first gallery show in August. I have been doing pottery for two years. I love the wheel myself, and those lumpy little efforts with practice start coming alive, so make 20 bowls, then 20 more, and you will be on your way!
Comment from Rosemarie L Tharp
This piece makes me want to try to write my own loop poetry. It's just so fun and I love the subject you chose. The repetition really shows how every pot is a new element of the potter's growing experience. It shows the act of constant creation. Well done.
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reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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This piece makes me want to try to write my own loop poetry. It's just so fun and I love the subject you chose. The repetition really shows how every pot is a new element of the potter's growing experience. It shows the act of constant creation. Well done.
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Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Rosemarie, thank you!