Comment from June Sargent

Exceptional

I am so impressed by this journey of faith! The ever widening circles took you away and then drew you back home where you - and all of us - belong. Ultimately a journey of self discovery as well.

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

June, you understand the journey that it is. Thank you for the great review.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Exceptional

This is a stunning verse, simply and skilfully written with such strong image and imagery. I am not particularly religious but this beautiful poem has such depth of meaning and impact that I am drawn magnetically and emotionally into its sphere. Thanks for sharing, Ginda. Take care, Debbie

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Debbie, thanks so much for your encouraging feedback.

Comment from Wendy G

Exceptional

A simply written but very creative and thought provoking poem. I like the ever expanding circles now reducing and zeroing back to the Centre of the universe. Imaginative. Well written. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Thank you, Wendy, for your positive feedback. I always appreciate your input.

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

Wow, this is beautiful! I like the ever-widening circles taking you to new adventures, contrasted with the ever-tightening circles that pull you into the arms of God. Best wishesin the contest. Blessings. Caorl

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Thank you, Carol.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Praise God for never letting go of us even though we were not aware of His presence in the "ever widening circles" of life's travels. He remains our center so we know we are safe. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Bless you, Helen.

reply by lyenochka on 03-May-2023

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

ooh this was a very nice faith poem
nothing about religion
no preaching
just a journey...
i like the short simple lines
smooth and quick flow
and read well

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Thank you, Shelley.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine faithful write as you move ever forward here in your journey through life and your beliefs Ginda, a fine spiritual write for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Bless you, Dolly.

Comment from Annmuma

Exceptional

Beautifully written and illustrated. The lesson is a capsule of what I believe: i.e. we are sent here to learn certain things, accomplish certain things, make mistakes and gain knowledge that will allow us to grow spiritually. As the end of our time in this incarnation, we begin to be drawn back to our origin and our only real home - a reunion with our Maker.

Thanks for posting. ann

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Thank you, Ann, for your kind words. You really do understand what I wanted to express with this poem.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Oh, this is just beautiful, stunning and illuminating! God indeed loves us and leads us along. Nothing escapes Him or deters Him.

Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
A winner in my eyes!
Sal XOs

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 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Thank you, Sal.