Love You More
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Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice loop poem, Jessica. This is a very good poem of love for ones child. A good change of pace from the love poem for two lovers. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Nice loop poem, Jessica. This is a very good poem of love for ones child. A good change of pace from the love poem for two lovers. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Paul!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Wendy G
A wonderful Loop poem. You've crafted it with skill. It flows smoothly and the added rhyme shows a deft hand. The theme is universal and will relate to most of all. Beautifully done. Best wishes for your entry. I am sure it will do well.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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A wonderful Loop poem. You've crafted it with skill. It flows smoothly and the added rhyme shows a deft hand. The theme is universal and will relate to most of all. Beautifully done. Best wishes for your entry. I am sure it will do well.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Wendy thank you so much, that means a great deal to me!!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Loop poems fascinate me. This contest entry is very good. I can imagine how hard it is to not only loop a poem but to keep the meaning of the poem going. You did an excellent job doing both. Thank you for sharing it with us and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Loop poems fascinate me. This contest entry is very good. I can imagine how hard it is to not only loop a poem but to keep the meaning of the poem going. You did an excellent job doing both. Thank you for sharing it with us and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Barbara!
Xo
Comment from Mrs. KT
Beautiful and heartfelt sentiments, Jessica, told in the Loop poem format.
As I mother and grandmother, I surely can embrace and empathize with your lovely and tender thoughts.
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Beautiful and heartfelt sentiments, Jessica, told in the Loop poem format.
As I mother and grandmother, I surely can embrace and empathize with your lovely and tender thoughts.
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Diane, thank you so much! I must admit, this form turned out to be trickier than I had initially anticipated!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Julie Lau
Congratulations, Jessica, you have created a loop poem with a lovely sentiment; that of a mother's love for her child. Well done, and I hope your poem does well in the contest. Julie L
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Congratulations, Jessica, you have created a loop poem with a lovely sentiment; that of a mother's love for her child. Well done, and I hope your poem does well in the contest. Julie L
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Julie!!
Comment from Sally Law
What a beautiful loop poem, Jess. I think this is one of the most difficult poetry forms. You made it look effortless in free flowing verse. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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What a beautiful loop poem, Jess. I think this is one of the most difficult poetry forms. You made it look effortless in free flowing verse. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thank you so much, my friend! And congrats on your placing in Book of the Month! You had my vote! Xoxo
Jess
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Jessica, this is such a beautiful love poem to your child, heartfelt and sweet. I know that it is an intimate expression of love between you and your child, but I can see this as a children's book, for mothers to share with their children. Have you done any children's books?
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Jessica, this is such a beautiful love poem to your child, heartfelt and sweet. I know that it is an intimate expression of love between you and your child, but I can see this as a children's book, for mothers to share with their children. Have you done any children's books?
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Ginda, thank you, that means so much to me! I haven't yet, but I am intrigued by that thought- and honored!
Xoxo
Jessica
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Finally, after a half hour of reviewing I find a loop poem that is not do loopy, mentally. This actual;ly makes sense and for that I give you an extra star. Well done
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Finally, after a half hour of reviewing I find a loop poem that is not do loopy, mentally. This actual;ly makes sense and for that I give you an extra star. Well done
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Tom, thank you so much! I'm honored!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very lovely loop poem and a fine submission too. Such a sweet and wonderful thing to be so blessed. Love in life and a supporting other half. Wonderful I am happy for you!
Having said that I didn't enjoy reading this very much. I quite like script you have chosen Goes with a love poem I think.
I see no grammatical errors nor do I have the issues with spelling punctuation or sentence structure at all so looking good to me I think it's. A great poem and it's a fine submission. I wish you the best to luck every night!
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reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Very lovely loop poem and a fine submission too. Such a sweet and wonderful thing to be so blessed. Love in life and a supporting other half. Wonderful I am happy for you!
Having said that I didn't enjoy reading this very much. I quite like script you have chosen Goes with a love poem I think.
I see no grammatical errors nor do I have the issues with spelling punctuation or sentence structure at all so looking good to me I think it's. A great poem and it's a fine submission. I wish you the best to luck every night!
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Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thank you , Lea!
Jessica
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet natured loop Jessica with a warm loving sentiment and I loved the gentle flow of words as your poem is an easy tranquil read, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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This is a sweet natured loop Jessica with a warm loving sentiment and I loved the gentle flow of words as your poem is an easy tranquil read, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thanks so much, Dolly!
Xo
Jessica