Comment from JSD

Excellent

Perfectly judged verse for kids. The tone, subject matter, message, language and jaunty rhythm and rhyme are all utterly appropriate. Well done and good luck in the contest. X

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023

Thank you for the review. I'm glad you think it works for kids.
Beth

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Oh I'm so pleased to hear there are some good witches around. We've been frightened silly by the bad! Love her name and I'm quite fond of her one - eyed cat and black trombone (quite a character!). This will be a great verse for children I've no doubt. Small edit she('s) not alone. Well done and good luck, Beth! Debbie

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023

Thank you, Debbie. I really appreciate the review and comments.
Beth

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

I love this delightful Halloween poem for children. Your rhymes flow easily enough for children to chant the verses. The picture is scary, but children would love knowing it was a good witch and friendly kitty. I wish you the best in the contest with this creative poem.

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023

Thank you for a neat review. I enjoyed your comments.
Beth