Guided by Faith
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Chapter 20 B"Can faith guide our path?
34 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
This was a lovely, caring chapter. I so look forward to the romance I know is coming, somewhere down the road. A couple of spags. dirt in the c(re)[r]vices
"I(s)[t] i(t)[s] all right
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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This was a lovely, caring chapter. I so look forward to the romance I know is coming, somewhere down the road. A couple of spags. dirt in the c(re)[r]vices
"I(s)[t] i(t)[s] all right
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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LOl thank you for the catches. I just made the corrections. As always I appreciate the help.
Comment from BethShelby
How many days to you give you characters before they can fall in love. They've had three weeks. They might not be willing to admit it yet. LOL I'm sure if she didn't have a policeman looking after her she would already gone home to her parents. I would if I was being stalked.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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How many days to you give you characters before they can fall in love. They've had three weeks. They might not be willing to admit it yet. LOL I'm sure if she didn't have a policeman looking after her she would already gone home to her parents. I would if I was being stalked.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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I think they're both in love but afraid of it. She didn't know until today that she was being stalked. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jim Wile
One less worry. At least it seems like Molly will be okay.
I wish we could get this story in larger chunks or more often than one chapter a week. It's good, and when something is good, you just want more of it. Oh well!
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"A sleeping bag and a few things we might need. "Want to sleep on the back patio? I'd suggest that over outdoors. There's mosquitos out there."
Extra quotation mark before Want.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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One less worry. At least it seems like Molly will be okay.
I wish we could get this story in larger chunks or more often than one chapter a week. It's good, and when something is good, you just want more of it. Oh well!
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"A sleeping bag and a few things we might need. "Want to sleep on the back patio? I'd suggest that over outdoors. There's mosquitos out there."
Extra quotation mark before Want.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the catch. I took out that little scallywag. I'm sure gremlins added it. LOL I really do appreciate the help. The story is complete. I could post it daily or entire chapters, but people get upset over that too.
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Yes, I know. You can't please everybody.
Comment from royowen
Sometimes danger replaces moral considerations, and this is one one of those times. Molly seems to be on the mend and Emma certainly needs the comfort derived from her little dog, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Sometimes danger replaces moral considerations, and this is one one of those times. Molly seems to be on the mend and Emma certainly needs the comfort derived from her little dog, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Ulla
It reads absolutely beautifully, Barbara, so no worries. I'm glad Molly will be okay. It's the first time, I've come across someone camping on the living room floor. But why not? Lol.
It's a great chapter. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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It reads absolutely beautifully, Barbara, so no worries. I'm glad Molly will be okay. It's the first time, I've come across someone camping on the living room floor. But why not? Lol.
It's a great chapter. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement. It's all I could come up with Emma might allow him to stay without too much of a fuss.
Comment from lancellot
Everything seems well written, and all your characters are nice and good natured. Seth is very helpful, so is dad. Emma's on again, off again stalker, for whatever reason, pulls an escalating prank. No one has cameras or any clue or motive. The reader only knows Emma has the worst luck of anyone in a small town for three weeks. Something to think about. Motivation, and plausible reasoning are essential to a solid storyline.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Everything seems well written, and all your characters are nice and good natured. Seth is very helpful, so is dad. Emma's on again, off again stalker, for whatever reason, pulls an escalating prank. No one has cameras or any clue or motive. The reader only knows Emma has the worst luck of anyone in a small town for three weeks. Something to think about. Motivation, and plausible reasoning are essential to a solid storyline.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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There are no cameras at Emma's house. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
The mystery of who the creepy guy stalking Emma is still hanging in the air. But Seth keeps his watchful eye on her, she is without her trusted dog, who is slowly recovering. The camping trip has plenty of lighthearted moments that show how Seth and Emma are coping with the stress of this unresolved situation. Much as it would happen in real life. So we sympathize with them, we await the inevitable confrontation with the stalker, the suspense is slowly building. estory
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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The mystery of who the creepy guy stalking Emma is still hanging in the air. But Seth keeps his watchful eye on her, she is without her trusted dog, who is slowly recovering. The camping trip has plenty of lighthearted moments that show how Seth and Emma are coping with the stress of this unresolved situation. Much as it would happen in real life. So we sympathize with them, we await the inevitable confrontation with the stalker, the suspense is slowly building. estory
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from judiverse
I'm so glad Molly's on the mend. She can at least warn Emma of an intruder. It seems that one person is responsible for what's been happening to Emma. I suggest Seth get busy and catch the guy who's been threatening her instead of spending all his time baby-sitting her. It's been so long since I slept in a sleeping bag, I forget what it's like. Emma and Seth must have kept warm. Nice little detail about Emma wanting to paint the cement blocks. She's a bit whimsical and has an artistic side. Great work with the characters. I like the slow build-up of the relationship. judi
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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I'm so glad Molly's on the mend. She can at least warn Emma of an intruder. It seems that one person is responsible for what's been happening to Emma. I suggest Seth get busy and catch the guy who's been threatening her instead of spending all his time baby-sitting her. It's been so long since I slept in a sleeping bag, I forget what it's like. Emma and Seth must have kept warm. Nice little detail about Emma wanting to paint the cement blocks. She's a bit whimsical and has an artistic side. Great work with the characters. I like the slow build-up of the relationship. judi
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think Seth will have a hard time trying to pay for Emma's bills. There will be a big one for Molly, if it's anything like it is in England. You definitely need pet insurance. They the other bills she's be having to deal with. Let's hope Seth can come up with a good enough reason when the time comes. Well done, Barbara, another nice chapter. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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I think Seth will have a hard time trying to pay for Emma's bills. There will be a big one for Molly, if it's anything like it is in England. You definitely need pet insurance. They the other bills she's be having to deal with. Let's hope Seth can come up with a good enough reason when the time comes. Well done, Barbara, another nice chapter. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Ben Colder
Wee doggie! And the beat goes on. Good way to catch the stalker if things can go along as good as they have been. Molly, oh, Molly where are you? Good one, Barb.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Wee doggie! And the beat goes on. Good way to catch the stalker if things can go along as good as they have been. Molly, oh, Molly where are you? Good one, Barb.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.